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    179 KB beethy !xVBeethyXI 09/08/09(Tue)17:37 No.526652  
    Animania09
    Was there for the whole 2 days.. It was good fun
    Critique the shit out of these please
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    >> beethy !xVBeethyXI 09/08/09(Tue)17:37 No.526653
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    >> beethy !xVBeethyXI 09/08/09(Tue)17:39 No.526654
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    >> beethy !xVBeethyXI 09/08/09(Tue)17:39 No.526656
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    >> Anonymous 09/08/09(Tue)17:40 No.526658
    >>526652
    got a dust spot on this one! didnt actually notice until i went to click something and my eyes wandered over it
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    >> beethy !xVBeethyXI 09/08/09(Tue)17:45 No.526665
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    >>526658
    top right?
    i'll remove it, thanks
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    >> beethy !xVBeethyXI 09/08/09(Tue)17:46 No.526668
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    >> beethy !xVBeethyXI 09/08/09(Tue)17:48 No.526671
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    >> beethy !xVBeethyXI 09/08/09(Tue)17:50 No.526676
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    Last one for now.. there are still a few more to edit
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    >> sizzle titz !e1QaonJtFE 09/08/09(Tue)17:51 No.526677
    >>526654
    What the fuck is wrong with her left leg?
    >> Anonymous 09/08/09(Tue)18:02 No.526684
    Hi everyone,

    I'm a aussie bound creative photographer from holland, my style stems from my interest in visual arts. I like weird ass movies, they inspire fun out of my photography. Looking to create concepts surrounding the human face and form.


    Oh and I'm pretty funny. :]
    >> Anonymous 09/08/09(Tue)18:17 No.526697
    >>526684
    The hell?
    >> johnL !!04Y44+FJNWz 09/08/09(Tue)18:50 No.526725
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    >> Anonymous 09/08/09(Tue)18:53 No.526729
    A lot of these are some of the best con photos I've seen.
    I don't go here much so I don't really know how to critique. Soz
    >> Anonymous 09/08/09(Tue)18:55 No.526732
    cool photos OP. I especially love pics 1 & 2
    >> sizzle titz !e1QaonJtFE 09/08/09(Tue)18:57 No.526733
    >>526725
    iknorite?
    >> Anonymous 09/08/09(Tue)19:00 No.526739
    Beethy, I'm really not a fan of your PP or weeaboo culture in general, but I really, really like these shots. Not my cup of tea, but I could see someone wanting to use these to advertise their event, easy.
    >> Anonymous 09/08/09(Tue)19:03 No.526745
    >>526725
    Did she died?
    >> tedious !u.FOsPdzsI 09/08/09(Tue)19:52 No.526775
    You know your way around a picture, so i'll just point out how I feel about them.
    >>526671 >>526670 >>526668 >>526665 >>526659
    >>526656 >>526653 >>526652 >>526676 >>526675
    Good images, Good Ideas, Good execution.

    However
    >>526654
    Because the background is complex; it's a messy image. My eye is drawn all over the place. The girl is lost in all that detail in the bricks. If you wanted to keep the same background, I would have shot with more isolation with either a longer lens, or a tighter crop. Either way, drastically reduce the DOF so that you can get the viewer to focus on what's important. Also, crop that shit above her head. It's not needed.

    >>526669
    Same. Too much DOF. Your models is compete with the local architecture, which shouldn't happen. I would have moved her completely in front of the panels, and a couple steps forward, and a bit tighter. I appreciate you trying for more complex composition, but you're adding weird stuff, which detracts from the strength of your image. I want the person to be the majority of the image, not concrete.

    >>526672
    Same problem basically as above. It's too loosely framed, not focused enough on the model in terms of composition and DOF. Poles are a no-no unless it's part of your lines, and your background is cluttered. If only you had FF for more DOF, it would have helped.

    Is there any reason you mostly chose to go with full body portraits? I guess the cosplayers wanted to see ALL their outfit, but I would have cropped most of these above the thigh to focus on the top half of the costume, and the face/eyes/expression.

    Not a fan of the PP, because I tend towards warmer contrastier images, then what you're doing.

    Are you selling these?
    >> NatureDude !se3A3TwzdY 09/08/09(Tue)20:08 No.526791
    >>526652
    Sensor spot, upper right
    color balance that terrible cyan to more of a true blue
    and the guy fails for untied boots

    >>526653
    color balance again
    also his shoes are too bright in relation to the rest of the image, aka they're drawing too much attention to themselves darken them or bring up some highlights else where
    slight sharpening would be good too

    >>526654
    I want to like it, but there just isn't enough going on in the composition, also cyan

    >>526656
    okay I love this one, but mostly because of how seriously that little kid is taking himself. Also cyan


    overall they're good shots, but need something more going on them besides people being people in costumes. There's little to no interaction between the costume and the background in most of these images.
    >> Anonymous 09/08/09(Tue)20:12 No.526800
    cool shots bro
    >> Anonymous 09/08/09(Tue)20:13 No.526803
    >>526652
    wheres the exif?
    >> sizzle titz !e1QaonJtFE 09/08/09(Tue)20:39 No.526838
    >>526803
    What the fuck is up with these "where is the EXIF" posts?
    >> tizzou !!HuouSd+PYUs 09/08/09(Tue)21:07 No.526869
    I have to go read the news but keep this near the front page and I'll give you some C&C.

    And for god's sake I hope you didn't shoot wide open in broad daylight again.
    >> Anonymous 09/08/09(Tue)21:11 No.526875
    I am impressed simply because you got them to be against backdrops and posed rather than the usual shitload of people behind and to the sides shots I usually get at cons. I am guessing you asked them to move to a secluded spot for some 'pro' type shots. Perhaps promising them a copy in their email inbox?
    >> Anonymous 09/08/09(Tue)21:14 No.526884
    You ever have problems with using a 50mm on a crop sensor?

    Was at Anime Expo couple of months ago, and I found it a huge pain in the ass using a 28mm + 450d. I ended up ditching it, used the 18-55mm kit lens for all the other days.
    >> Anonymous 09/08/09(Tue)21:16 No.526888
    >>526654
    >>526653
    >>526669
    Were you standing really far away in these?
    >> Anonymous 09/08/09(Tue)21:18 No.526894
    >>526652
    Did you use a tripod for these shots?
    >> Anonymous 09/08/09(Tue)21:18 No.526895
    >>526888
    Well, with a 50mm on a crop sensor, it's kind of in the telephoto range at that point. (Like 80 or 85mm or so?)
    >> Anonymous 09/08/09(Tue)21:49 No.526937
    >>526894
    ...... You don't need a tripod for that.
    >> Anonymous 09/08/09(Tue)22:00 No.526951
    Australia sure does have a lot of cons
    >> tizzou !!HuouSd+PYUs 09/08/09(Tue)22:04 No.526955
    >>526652
    The sky could be darker. Don't like all the empty space on top either. Blue could deeper. I almost feel with the post his free arm should be up above his eyes looking off in the distance.

    >>526653
    Not a fan of his facial expression or pose. He looks too forced and I don't like how his hand is on the headphone blocking it from view And the cord just goes down is body out of sight then back up his crotch into the pocket where some mystery mp3 player is. If possible try and shoop of the wristband. Try and also make the background darker/grimey-er feel to it (blacks darker and up the contrast maybe?). You actually could've shot this wider or maybe try a tighter crop; both might work I think.

    >>526654
    I like how sharp this is. Shame about the shadows to the left of her legs ruining the even-ness of the BG. I'm not a fan all the dead space. Try a horizontal crop around her head and shoulders using the rule of thirds for the eyes. Would be nice if both hands were holding the bag so the hand that isn't doing anything doesn't look awkward. Try and shooop the green out of her top as well.

    >>526656
    Shorter DoF would've helped this shot. Also had him step left two steps or move away from that cover on the road where his shadow is. And why is his hand not down the sleeve? I don't think the cooler feel works for this. Maybe try something warmer and darkening the shot.

    >>526659
    A little looser framing would've been nice. Nice and sharp and good colors. I would've preferred her to have her hands behind her back pushing her chest forward a little.

    >>526665
    That flare ruins the shot. Why did you cut off his head? A lower angle may have been better, but I don't know what the background was. If you can, see if you can pull any detail out of those hotspots on his head/arm and the black areas on the body/hair.
    >> tizzou !!HuouSd+PYUs 09/08/09(Tue)22:05 No.526959
    >>526955 con't

    >>526668
    Shame there is a walkway running through her head/shoulders. Maybe try b/w and messing with heavy contrast?

    >>526669
    i keep looking more at that post than her. Colors are fine. I wish her head would've been up a little more so I could see her eyes.

    >>526670
    Again, see if you can pull any detail out of those hotspots on his back and arm but good shot otherwise.

    >>526671
    Shame you're reflected in his goggles :/ The horizon is also off kilter, try making it more off. Seems to fit his character.

    >>526672
    Come on, wide open in broad daylight again? Tsk tsk. Her head is OOF. The background is also too busy. Pose seems weird but idk what could fix it. (Ask 5hoe).

    >>526675
    Try and pull out any detail on the dress that you can/gown you can. This also seems slightly crooked. Try a tighter crop, too, so we don't see the modern stuff at the end of the train.Also maybe fade/mute the colors more or try sepia?

    >>526676
    See if you can clean up those glowing hair strands by her face and crop just a wee bit off the top as well.
    >> 5hoe !idbqkIQrjY 09/08/09(Tue)22:18 No.526973
    >>526671
    I only have a couple minutes, but this shot is fucking awesome. The guy's expression fits his outfit fits the background fits the theme of the convention.

    You nailed it. 'nuff said.
    >> Anonymous 09/08/09(Tue)23:25 No.527004
    Don't tell me your not charging for these
    >> Anonymous 09/09/09(Wed)01:05 No.527093
    I dont think this guy ever charges
    >> Anonymous 09/09/09(Wed)01:39 No.527129
    hmm are you the same guy who did those supernova shots awhile back? pp looking awfully familiar..
    >> Anonymous 09/09/09(Wed)02:21 No.527165
    >>527129
    yea beethy is the same guy you're probably thinking about
    he also did the other convention after
    >> beethy !xVBeethyXI 09/09/09(Wed)04:45 No.527271
    Holy ass, thanks for the huge responses /p/
    I'll go through these tomorrow
    >> 5hoe !idbqkIQrjY 09/09/09(Wed)05:19 No.527298
    >>526653
    I like this one but maybe I wish the top of the circle was in the shot.

    >>526656
    And this one is sweet except I would pump the blacks a little bit because it's washed out.

    >>526676
    Her hat seems to be a bit two-toned and I'm not sure what's going on here. The underside of her hat has a black square that makes it look somehow off. Maybe blend that hard square line or something? Does anyone else notice this? Also, just for grins, see how it looks in lite-sepia.
    >> Anonymous 09/09/09(Wed)06:19 No.527325
    OP what's your email?
    >> beethy !xVBeethyXI 09/09/09(Wed)07:29 No.527352
    >>527325
    note me on dA.. i dont post my email here
    >> Anonymous 09/09/09(Wed)16:15 No.527735
    >>527352
    >dA
    >> Anonymous 09/09/09(Wed)16:44 No.527751
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    >>527735
    right, because beethy hasn't already made it massively obvious he's a huge weeaboo faggot...
    >> Anonymous 09/09/09(Wed)16:48 No.527757
    >>527751

    ur fuckin dumb. go back to flickr
    >> Anonymous 09/09/09(Wed)16:52 No.527765
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    >>527757
    u mad

    weeaboo
    >> Anonymous 09/09/09(Wed)16:54 No.527770
    >>527757

    Weeaboo spotted



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