http://pastebin.com/u/Laconic
http://pastebin.com/u/Leucine
http://pastebin.com/u/LowerThanDirtt
http://pastebin.com/u/lulzies
http://pastebin.com/u/Lurking_Giant
http://pastebin.com/u/lurkerparking
http://pastebin.com/u/LynxAmurie
http://pastebin.com/u/mageanon
http://pastebin.com/u/Mandroid
http://pastebin.com/u/MisterElGuapo
http://pastebin.com/u/MisterTibbs
http://pastebin.com/u/NoLongerAnon
http://pastebin.com/u/OneTripPony
http://pastebin.com/u/OrganicConstruct
http://pastebin.com/u/PaleNarrator
http://pastebin.com/u/Pikeman
http://pastebin.com/u/PonyAirman
http://pastebin.com/u/Pony_Azathoth
http://pastebin.com/u/PonyForge
http://pastebin.com/u/PonyGone
http://pastebin.com/u/r00tb33r
http://pastebin.com/u/Rape_Train
http://pastebin.com/u/Redhawk2398
http://pastebin.com/u/RnR66
http://pastebin.com/u/RT_pony
http://pastebin.com/u/Serrated
http://pastebin.com/u/shukaku20
http://pastebin.com/u/Sorcanon
http://pastebin.com/u/Sudo
http://pastebin.com/u/Tech
http://pastebin.com/u/TechyConversant
http://pastebin.com/u/Thelonious
http://pastebin.com/u/The_Shermanator
http://pastebin.com/u/TheScooter
http://pastebin.com/u/THUNDEReLg
http://pastebin.com/u/Tsarroman
http://pastebin.com/u/tyko2000
http://pastebin.com/u/Unamazing_Writefag
http://pastebin.com/u/Uncle_Brainhorn
http://pastebin.com/u/ViolinAnon
http://pastebin.com/u/wiz_anon
http://pastebin.com/u/Wuten
http://pastebin.com/u/Zortith
http://pastebin.com/u/zuul
Master List: http://pastebin.com/pNU0cwuX

Reporting in. Not writing shit because of real life, but still lurking.

Parkin mah invisible boatmobile

TripfagsInEquestria

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Reporting in and feeling the LOVE

Ugh, fucking real life. I'll be back in a while; gotta help my dad move his shit.

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Porking and writing.
Mainly porking.

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Parking in! Dropping a new Bar Scene with enough Trixie to make Gadget faint at some point, hope you guys like class.

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New thread in the house.

Parking.

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Had a few ideas in my head about what to write about. AFTER I finish Spin the Bottle and Applerape. I do not intend to add to the pile until after the two of them are finally complete. Just wondering which one you guys think I could pull off.

1)Apothecarist in Equestria: Anonymous is transported to Equestria. During his initial run in with the other p0nies he makes a terrible first impression causing the p0nies to fear him, forcing him to be a recluse. During this time he runs in to Zecora, after their meeting she takes him into her home and in return he assists her with making various medicines and other concoctions. Basically a Zecora x Anonymous fic Aside from Zecora there won't be that many p0nies that interact with Anonymous other than Twilight and Fluttershy, maybe the CMC.

2) Gamer Anon in Equestria: It is implied that technology has made its mark in Equestria to the point of gaming consoles being made and used by various p0nies. During Anon's stay in Canterlot he happens to come across Luna's Room, he in turn finds out about her gaming 'addiction' and soon the two become friends.

3)Kings of Equestria: In a futuristic Earthen enviornment, humans have developed portals to far reaches of their galaxy. A corporation that just so happens to own their own portal, comes to Equestria and uses the land for resources. The humans rule Equestria with an iron fist Eventually the p0nies and other species in that world fight back in order to reclaim the land that was lost to them.Basically Syndicate in Equestria

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Reporting in and writing stupid stories about Lyra raping ponies.
Needed a break from all the anonXpony rape.

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Writing a story with these two. Maybe I won't quit immediately after starting.

>>2549218
Awesome.

>>2549218

Is there still an Anon? If not, wrong thread.

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Reporting in and parking.

Who the fuck is ready for some Sorcanon's delight? TOO FUCKING BAD, YOU'RE GETTING IT! Also, Parking.

>>2549205
#1 could be very interesting.

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Let us begin...

>There was something disturbingly familiar about the village before me.
>The mares were all pretty and pastel.
>'You are in Ponyville, Anon.'
>The truth was a rainbow colored sonic boom through my brain.
>Horses with wings floatin in the air, the yellow one with a scary eye.
>Endless repetition of parties getting crazy, and unwanted fashion advice.
>The paranoid feel that somepony might rape me any second.
>I was in ponyville.
>Funny as hell, it was the most horrible thing I could think of.

Dropping Bar Scene: Showtime. If you haven't read any of the other Bar Scenes or anything else I've written check them out on my pastebin:

http://pastebin.com/u/TechyConversant

Hope you enjoy!

-

>Another night in the dive.
>Not that you mind, of course.
>You belong here, whatever that means.
>Your money is good, the bartender knows your favorite drink.
>Life as usual.
>Taking a sip of your standard, brandy, you hear the door open.
>You know this mare, as does many others.
>This time she's not a depressed wreck.
>She's not even here to get drunk.
>Trixie's here for business.
>She has a gig here tonight.
>You made especially sure to be here tonight to see it.
>...but you know you would have been here anyway.

>>2549302

>"The Great and Powerful Trixie demands another glass of wine!"
>She's using the third person voice again.
>That's an awkward combination of good and bad.
>Good because it means she's in high spirits.
>Bed because you have to listen to it.
>Drinking all the brandy in the world wouldn't be enough to escape the third person.
>Won't stop you from trying, though.
>Downing another glass, you look to your companion.
"You think you're ready?"
>She scoffs at your 'bravado', as you're sure she would call it.
>"You dare insinuate that Trixie would ever not be ready for a show?"
>You dared.
"Trix, this crowd isn't like your other venues, you know."
>"How so?"
>A quick glance around the establishment was all it took.

>>2549325

>You knew this.
>She apparently didn't.
>To her, the world was a stage that was always watching.
>Unfortunately for her, the watching eyes weren't always waiting for the next trick.
>Those that weren't already glaring at Trixie's pre-show performance were thinking about doing so.
>The bar p0nies weren't like the awe-struck masses that loves watching flashy fireworks.
>You could swear they were praying for her next mess-up.
>Trixie seems to be handling it well, by either being completely ignorant of this fact...
>...or drowning herself with wine.
>"You don't need to worry about Trixie, Anon. The show will be FANTASTIC!"
>She throws her arms up in cheer, almost falling out of her stool.
>The only thing preventing her from crashing into the ground was you holding her up.
>That hold quickly changes to a grab, and you pull her out of the stool.
>"Hey, unhand Trixie!"
"Shut up."
>The prying eyes quickly dissipate as you pull Trixie out of the bar and through the back exit.

>>2549205
I agree, Numbah 1 sounds interesting, but doing all those Zecora lines would be tough to pull off, even if it was Tyko and myself writing them.

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>>2549205
Gamer Anon sounds like it could be fun for some Anon x Luna love. I'mm votin' for that.

>>2549302
Yes! More Bar scene! And with Trixie!

>>2549342

>"What are you doing?!?"
>You made it out of the bar, now stationed in the ever so pristine back alley.
>First order of business.
"Trix, you gotta understand something about that crowd."
>"Trixie doesn't need help with her act!"
"I'm trying to make sure you don't screw this up!"
>"Screw it up? The Great and Powerful Trixie would never!"
>This is getting fucking old, fast.
"Trix, listen to me, or you're going to-"
>"GOING TO WHAT? Fail? Make a flank of herself? Get run out of town again?!?"
>Tears are forming.
>Oh god damnit what did you do.
>"You think Trixie can't handle that again? Everyp0ny hating her?!"
>The tears fall down her cheeks.
>You gotta stop this.
>"Trixie doesn't CARE what they think ab-"
>Before she starts going hysterical, you act.
>The force of the slap not only shuts her up completely, it turns her face slightly.
>Before she can react, you grab her head and hold it still.
"Listen. To. Me."

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Living with Spaghetti Sparkle 19

Previous Chapters:
http://pastebin.com/u/bettyspaghetti

LW/Spaghetti Sparkle is an interactive story. Check it out here:
http://spaghettisparklechan.deviantart.com/

>you wake up the next morning
>Twilight is predictably at your side
>however, she's unpredictably awake
>in fact, she's absolutely energetic and is typing away on her laptop in bed
Hey Twi, good morning.
>Twi:"It IS a good morning!"
>she gives you a quick peck on the lips and goes back to what she was doing on her laptop
>you look over to check out what she's doing
>yep, that's DeviantART
Those trolls still bothering you, honey?
>Twi:"No. They usually don't bother me but I was drunk last night so they did."
Speaking of... you don't have a hangover?
>Twi:"Nope! Thanks to you, heartsweet."
Please don't call me 'heartsweet', heartsweet.
>Twi:"*giggle* Okay, but don't call me 'honey'. And definitely don't call me 'Twiley'."
Twiley?
>Twilight looks distant for a split second
>Twi:"Yeah. It's what Shining Armor called me."
Oh.
>...
How about no nicknames?
>Twi:"Sounds good to me, heartsweet. *giggle*"

1/x

>>2549205
Voting 1

>>2549368

>You've never slapped anyone before.
>Ever.
>Let alone a woman.
>Or female p0ny.
>You always held yourself with the air of a gentleman.
>But this sent you over the edge.
>For a while you've seen that mare walk in and out of this bar the same way.
>Confident on the intake, depressed on the downslope.
>Every time you shared your drinks with her to make up for the fact some p0nies didn't appreciate her parlor tricks.
>Every time she would blame something rediculous, or say the crowd wasn't ready.
>This crowd is ready for a show.
>That mare can put one on.
>And you're going to make sure it goes smoothly.
>You're met with a subtle nod, tears still present.
"You're a performer, are you not?"
>She nods.
"And performances change over time, right?"
>"Yeah..."
>Good, you're getting through.
"You have one shot to make these people like the act, and I'm not gonna let you mess this up."
>Looks like the tears have stopped.
>"I...Trix...I'm sorry..."
>She wipes away what's left from her cheeks.
>"I just couldn't handle that again...not here..."
"Then you need to put your nose to the grindstone and give these people something to cheer about."
>With a smirk, the old Trixie is back.
>"Alright!"
"So, here's what-"
>"Can Trixie keep talking in the third person?"
>...

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>>2549370

>a few hours pass
>you've eaten breakfast and are preparing for the Running of the Leaves
>in the past, you used to run with the best athlete in Ponyville: your ex-marefriend Rainbow Dash
>as the years went on, Applejack drifted away from Ponyville
>you currently know why, but at the time it came as a huge shock for Rainbow Dash
>you kind of took Applejack's place as her running mate in the Running of the Leaves
>this was one of the leading factors for why you eventually hooked up
>but now Applejack is back!
>she may have a limp leg now, but she can still run quite a few miles
>considering what you heard last night, you're starting to wonder how she got that injury
>it makes you sick to imagine it

>Luna usually shows up in the crowd, but she never runs
>Twilight and Rainbow Dash have told you that, in the past, Celestia used to show up and say that the Running of the Leaves was one of her favorite events
>in all your years living in Ponyville, you've never witnessed her attend
>nevertheless, Twilight is a bit irked that Luna will be there
>Twilight, even being the social retar-- student that she is, caught on that Luna has a crush on you
>you have no idea why Luna wants your dick so bad
>you should probably tell Twilight that Luna still sends you dirty photographs
>but now's not the time
>you have to convince Twilight to get her lazy flank out of bed and go running
>for leaves

2/x

>>2549205
Actually, Number 2 does sound more appealing

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Okay posting for sure today. If not then... Well shit.

>>2549381

>About an hour later...

>The crowd has arrived, at last.
>Seats are filled up, drinks have been served.
>You sit at the stool up at the counter, your usual spot.
>The bartender gives you a cold beer.
>Not your usual drink, but you don't want to be too drunk for this performance.
>After all, you helped her set it up.
>Here's hoping she took your advice.
>A red curtain covers most of the stage.
>The lights dim across the bar.
>It's time.
>Once the bar is pitch black, a spotlight snaps on, pointing towards the stage.
>In the background, a light piano kicks in.
>It's a light tone, matching the anticipation in the air.
>People shuffle in their seats, more than ready for the great reveal.
>And when the curtains open, the reveal is no less than great.

>>2549205
>Gamer Anon in Equestria
This.

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>>2549384

>you hear Twilight holler at you from the bedroom upstairs
>Twi:"ANON!!"
>you rush to see what's the matter
What's wrong Twi?!
>Twi:"I think I DO have a hangover! I just got a really bad headache."
Hold on. Let be get you some water.
>you almost stumble down the stairs while trying to get Twilight a glass of water
>you return
>Twi:"Anon. I read on the internet that you don't NEED to drink water to get better from a hangover. I could have juice or soda. It doesn't matter."
Yeah, so?
>Twi:"You lied to me! You said it NEEDED to be water. You BAKA jerk... Can you get me some ramune instead?"
*sigh* Twilight, I'm trying to keep you healthy.
>Twi:"You're NOT my parents. I can drink what I want."
>you smirk
>secret_weapon_activate.jpg
I just want my fiancee to be as healthy as she can be when she carries my foal~
>...
>Twi:"Hmph... give me the water."
I'm glad you see it my way.
>Twi:"You're STILL a baka-jerk. For your crime, you have to... um... give me a hug."
Okay.
>when you're hugging her, you feel her stomach rumble

3/x

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>>2549395

>The blue mare walks out on stage in a dress that is no less than classy.
>A few steps towards the crowd, and she turns her head up.
>The look of worry plastered on her face is obvious, at least to you.
>She wasn't used to this set up.
>You know it will work though.
>She goes to speak, and nothing's coming out.
>Oh no, no no no.
>She's choking.
>You aren't letting this go that easy!
>Bringing a hand to your face, you put two fingers in your mouth, and let loose a whistle.
>The kind of whistle a construction worker would toss at a passing girl.
>Most of the time it would inspire embarassment.
>But not this time.
>That was the vote of confidence she needed.
>The look of worry changes to a sultry grin.
>"Hello boys and girls, and welcome."
>With a turn, she tosses a glance that would knock any stallion off their feet towards the audience.
>"If you're interested in feats that shock and amaze, look no further than Trixie~"

>>2549413

>Her dulcet tones are meant to entice, and they are doing just that.
>A cheer comes from the audience, followed by a few others.
>You knew the crowd loves a little bit of flair.
>Just not the flair she had in mind.
>No, this is the way to go indeed.
>You chug down some of your Blue Ribbon.
>All going well, it seems.
>"So, who wants to see Trixie..."
>She flips her hair slightly, looking towards the audience once more.
>"...perform some 'tricks'?"
>They cheer her on, and the show goes on marvelously.
>It wasn't your normal magic show.
>The tricks were performed with a certain style that screamed elegance, in a way elegance can be screamed without it seeming unelegant.
>The way she walked, talked, and performed oozed class and grace.
>Truly a sight to behold.
>Much better than her usual drabble of performing parlor tricks and challenging p0nies.
>You won't tell her that though, she'd get offended.

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>>2549402

When was the last time you ate?
>Twi:"Exactly 6:34PM, last night."
It's one o' clock right now.
>Twi:"REALLY?? I've been so busy with my art that I forgot!"
Yeah. I don't think you're hung over. You're just hungry.
>she blushes
>Twi:"Oops... Get me that grass from Ponymart. Please?"
Okay, but we'll have to get you some healthier grass from now on. Ponymart has shit grass. I'll ask Rainbow Dash were she buys her's.
>Twi:"Thanks♥"
>she looks over to the digital clock on her night-stand
>Twi:"It's not one o' clock! It's 12:49PM."

>your fiancee
>too eggheaded to eat

=======

>with a little more coaxing, you get her out of bed and away from her computer
>she tries to get ready for the Running of the Leaves without getting distracted, but to no avail
>every now and then, she checks her DeviantART
>and tumblr
>and youtube
>and yahoo news
>and reddit
>eventually, she comes up to you, her laptop in tow
>Twi:"Anon! Could you prove to this dang dirty troll that you have sex with me every night and that I'm NOT a virgin."
>you read Twilight's posts

http://i.imgur.com/elMCc.jpg

>wow, she's pretty smug
Twilight, I thought you learned not to brag about me.
>Twi:"Oh... yeah. I guess. But wait! It's the internet! And he was trolling me first, so...?"
>whatever, you don't care what she does online
>you're in love with real Twilight, not online jerk Twilight
I guess it's fine if he trolled you first. What do you want me to say?

http://i.imgur.com/RcLLB.png

4/x

>>2549205

I personally vote Apothecarist. I've seen a few gamer anons already.

>>2549426

>The show ends, and the crowd applauds wildly.
>The Great and Powerful Trixie strikes again, you suppose.
>Turning back to the bar, you decide to finish off the night the right way.
>A celebratory sparkling champagne, for the successful show.
>As your back is turned to find the perfect bottle, a certain blue mare leaves the stage.
>She walks towards a certain person, who happens to not be looking.
>Wait, not looking?
>Has he been there the whole time?
>Was he even watching the show?
>It was too dark...
>When she goes to see this particular person, she's stopped.
>By quite the handsome stallion.
>He seems so nice...
>Is he asking her to leave?
>Well...
>He's still not looking...
>He clearly didn't appreciate the performance.
>She takes the stallion's side, and leaves with him.
>Okay, you picked out the perfect bottle...
>...and when you turn around, she's leaving.
>With a stallion.
>You sigh and crack open the bottle.
>Cheers to a good show, you suppose.
>The glass remains untouched as you drink straight from the bottle.
>Why should you care that she's leaving?
>As you look back one last time, her eyes connect with yours before she walks out the door.
>Yeah...
>...why should you care...

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That's all for now! Read it, and other stuff, on my pastebin.

'till next time!

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>>2549429

>wow, drawing with a mouse is harder than you thought it would be
>suddenly, Twilight is a great artist in comparison
Hey Twi. I thought I should let you know that you're a WAY better artist than me.
>she blushes
>Twi:"Th-thanks Anon.♥"
>...
>Twi:"I d-drew a picture of us about to k-kiss... What do you th-think?"

http://spaghettisparklechan.deviantart.com/art/me-and-Anon-about-to-kiss-307779752

>wow, she's so nervous about her art
I love it Twi! We both look kind of goofy, but in a cute way.
>you don't think she can blush any harder than she is
>it's like when you first met all over again
>Twi:"A-and... this is what I'm afraid will happen today at the Running of the L-Leaves."

http://spaghettisparklechan.deviantart.com/#/d53dets

Hahaha! You look so angry over there in the corner!
>you look at Twilight
>she's serious

5/x

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>>2549469

Oh Twi! I would never do anything with Princess Luna.
>Twi:"But... she's a princess and she can make you do stuff against your will!"
>she looks like she's about to cry
>Twi:"I know she has a SUPER huge crush on you."
You're telling me, heh.
>Twi:"Of course I'm telling you! You need to be warned!"
It was a figure of speech. I already knew.
>Twi:"Oh. Well... lets just be careful. Maybe Princess Celestia will be there instead."
I doubt it.
Twi:"Yeah, me too. The Running of the Leaves is a September Equinox holiday. It's when Prnicess Celestia gets weaker and Luna starts to get stronger."
So you think Celestia was full of shit when she said Running of the Leaves was one of her favorite holidays?
>Twi:"THE PRINCESS IS NEVER FULL OF SHIT!"
Sorry sorry sorry! I meant that she was just being nice when she said she liked Running of the Leaves and that she didn't really mean it.
>Twi:"Hmph... Yeah. I guess."

>>Note to self: NEVER MAKE CELESTIA OUT TO BE ANYTHING BUT AN INFALLIBLE GOD-HORSE IN FRONT OF TWILIGHT

>>PS: Dayum Twilight. Dat ass just won't stop when you're angry! It gets all... uptight.

6/6

~~~END PART 19~~~
NEXT: THE RUNNING OF THE LEAVES

Parking.
Not sure if I'll ever get to writing.
I'm always too busy or tired to do it.

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Parking. Diablo is still in the works, but I'll have an update by tonight.

>>2549516

I enjoy this.

Hey! Dinky! Where did you put Chronicler's staff! He has to have it tomorrow! Sorcanon yelled to Dinky. "Daddy, it 's over there. I cleaned it too. Is Daddy happy now?" she asked. Sorcanon looks at the table where Dinkypointed. There it was, Chronicler's shining staff."Yeah whateve..." Sorcanon stopped at the middle of sentence, and looked at the staff. It was clean, shining without any decay, cracks or rot. Dinky had cleaned it so it was completely useless now. "Okay. That's it. I've had enough. Hey flankwipe, get your worthless flank here right now!" Dinky ran to Sorcanon as fast as she could, looking at him with smile that showed all her teeth, like she was expecting for some kind of reward."Yes Daddy?" she asked. Sorcanon gave her stern look, and pulled his half-erected manhood from his pants. "Its your time to say hello to Sorcanon junior." Dinky gasped and then blushed. "I..." she tried to say but he interrupted her. "We either please Khorne or Slaanesh, I don't care which, so the choice is yours" Sorcanon said, chainsword in other and dick in other hand. "Slaanesh..." Dinky replied submissively."Fine. Stick your flank up." he commanded and Dinky did as she was told to do. Sorcanon found himself staring at Dinky's tight ass. "Damn that Slaanesh..." he thought.He placed his hands on Dinky's croup and slowly, expectantly ran them down over the filly's lower croup, onto her firm behind. Unable to keep himself from smiling a gleeful, wild smile, Sorcanon adjusted the position of her stumpy legs and, with each of his thumbs, pulled the fillys's cheeks apart.

>>2549529
Dinky tensed. She knew what was coming from the moment her Daddy’s thumbs had dug into the meat of her behind and pulled it apart. She had never, ever tried this before, and now this.. This thing would be the first to take her? She shook her head, her forelegs tensed. There was nothing, absolutely nothing she could do.Sorcanon had, finally it seemed, placed the tip of his hugely thick cock against Dinky’s sphincter. In quiet resignation and beginning resolve to make it through this as well, the young filly stared out over the warp, trying to ignore the monster behind her playing with her cheeks, trying to squeeze the huge cock inside her, a task that was quite impossible due to the simple fact that the head of it was almost as big as one flank.It seemed almost as if that thing had become larger, but Dinky quickly got other things on her mind as her Daddy’s big and strong hands ran to her point of hip, where they latched on in a vice-like grip. Half a second later, Dinky felt as if someone was trying to force a chair up into her ass. Her rear was pushed inwards as Sorcanon gradually put more pressure on the huge cock. It was uncomfortable, but not painful as such. The pressure was mounting, and the young filly was beginning to writhe uncomfortably, but there was no pain.Then, it seemed as if something within her let go, and the pressure against the outside of her small, tight ass abated, only to be replaced with pressure inside as her pelvis bones began to creak and move, her insides rearranging to make room for the huge cockhead that was lodged inside Dinky’s ass.

>>2549485
That is so odd....I liked the update, but it feels like filler for some reason.Hmm, we established a fear of Twilights, but apart from that.....

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>New Anon chapter tomorrow around this general time frame.

>I will be leaving from the 16th to the 23rd for an important event. I'll still be working, but I won't be around 4chan for these days.

>>2549541
In a delayed reaction, pain lashed through her body almost as if an earthquake had hit her and only her, the force seeming to dwindle only preciously little as the sickening pain continued lashing through her form, culminating in an insane scream of complete agony.With the frenzy of somepony fighting for their survival, Dinky hoofed at the ground in front of her, screaming and sobbing, legs kicking and hitting Sorcanon's thighs. None of it slowed her Daddy down. He kept still, in his mind likening himself a little to the center of a tornado, almost meticulously watching that thick meat force into the struggling filly’s small ass. It was a delight, feeling how he would add almost a third to Dinky’s weight just by forcing this cock into her ass. It was a delight watching how her body almost seemed to be eating up the wide, pulsing cock, so stretched was it. There were almost no flank left to be seen, Dinky’s hips and pelvis had moved outwards as five massive inches of cock had been forced in after the cockhead. Just for this occasion, Sorcanon had let this cock grow to twenty two inches and let it become about two inches thicker.Gradually the kicking against Sorcanon's thighs died down. He kept a steady pace, forcing his wide, veined, much too large cock into Dinky’s stretching ass at about an inch every ten seconds. This meant that after about two full minutes, the entire, pulsing cock was hilted in Dinky, who at this point had lost most of the sensation in her lower body.

>>2549556
It was no problem for Sorcanon to hilt himself completely in his submissive victim, pelvis against butt, so much had the cock pushed Dinky’s pelvis and flank out of shape. The sobbing, writhing form under Sorcanon that was now almost a third cock was still feebly trying to crawl forward, mouth hanging open, spittle hanging from muzzle and strands of mane, her eyes at once wild and absent. Her insides had been pushed around, bones bent, so impossibly much pain had been inflicted on her in the last three minutes that she had lost touch with reality for the time being. Sorcanon leaned forward, releasing his grip of the filly’s bulging waist, instead placing one hand flat on Dinky’s croup and the other on the sand to the side. Keeping the body below his in place, he began slowly, deliberately pulling his huge dick backwards, out, until about half of it was outside Dinky’s abused body.In a long, fluid movement, her Daddy pushed eleven inches of thick cock into Dinky’s ass, spending just twenty seconds this time. He repeated the movement, setting up a slow pace. As the minutes passed, his speed had now approached the brutal speed of pounding those eleven inches of cock into Dinky’s ass in two, then finally.. One second.The young pony was in shock. She felt every jolt of insane, all-consuming pain, but she could no longer react. She was drooling, gradually being pushed forward through the sand from the force of Sorcanon’s pounding, all the power she could muster was reaching a shaking, hoof forward, digging into the sand in a feeble attempt at dragging herself away from the torture and into sweet, oblivious nothingness.

>>2549572
Nothing happened, except the rhythmic, crushing pace of Sorcanon’s cock thrusting in and out. Even as he grunted and the meat started quaking in orgasm, he never stopped thrusting in and out. Hot, sticky cum blasted into Dinky as that huge shaft just kept plowing in and out, in and out.. until the orgasm abated. Sorcanon was finally breathing heavily now, as the cum-smeared, pulsing cock slowly left Dinky’s insides. At last, only the first half of the head was left inside the filly’s abused body. Her daddy reached a hand forward and grabbed a handful of Dinky’s mane, pulling the filly’s head backwards while he leaned forward himself, whispering while panting. ”That.. was... the beginning. Now... we start... for real.”He held cultist by her hair for a while longer, pressing finger to Dinky’s teary, drool-covered, bruised face before leaning up again. He kept a hold of the soft, sticky hair with one hand, the other hand pushing veined shaft down.As hot, viscous cum started leaking past the huge cock, Sorcanon edged a finger under Dinky’s ring muscle and, with a little help from the cum, managed to widen the opening just enough for the rock hard shaft to make room for itself and glide in again. Dinky was barely able to use her legs, yet was held up on her hooves by a combination of the huge cock in her ass and the firm grip of her mane.Behind this abused filly sat a bigger, older chaos space marine with monstrous cock jutting from her pelvis, clearly in the process of impaling the young filly halfway kneeling in front of her. Powerful scent of Sorcanon’s first explosion of cum was carried on the wind far into the woods, and Dinky jiggled ever so slightly with every trembling movement.

>>2549586
Dinky’s pelvic bone was flattened, her sides bulging, her body stretched so far that her feminine form was only vaguely visible around her ass. With a firm grip of his daughter's mane and one hand gripping the grotesquely bulging waist, the veiny, thick, unrelenting cock was forced inwards, into Dinky. The young pony’s vision began swimming, then failed completely for a few seconds, her hearing coming and going, breathing rasping.Her mind had shut down the pain, she could clearly feel the indescribable agony wracking her body, yet she could do nothing. She could not react. Her mind was trying to rationalize this, trying to cope. Cum leaked from her stretched ass as the massive twenty two inch monster were forced into Dinky’s body, the fillys’s front beginning to bulge just above her belly as the cock began to near hilting.In another, nearby world, Dinky was halfway bending, her eyes closed and her mouth open in a moan. Her forelimbs were reaching back to her own ass, holding it open as Sorcanon’s cock was shoved into the young filly’s behind. One hand held Dinky’s mane in a demanding grip, the grip of a master, while the other was playing with the filly’s clit. Slowly, as gently as such a huge girth would allow, Sorcanon pressed the cock all the way into Dinky, the filly arching her back as much as the cock would allow, as pleasure wracked her.

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>>2549556
>>2549541
>>2549529

Alright, time to upda-
>MFW

>>2549597
After another blink of her eyes, Dinky was back on the beach, cum dripping from her gaping ass, her face once again covered in drool and tears. Finally, her voice returned to her, her body convulsing, a rasping, desperate scream sounding over the abandoned beach as the huge, thick cock was thrust into her ass once again, the first of a series of hilting thrusts that left Dinky completely powerless and sobbing with a pain so intense that she could feel nothing else in the world. Her vision had reddened, scream upon helpless scream sounding as her front bulged and sucked in time and time again, the massive cock pumping in and out without pause. Then, for what seemed like a fraction of a second, Sorcanon hesitated. He was sweating, gasping for air, on the verge of his second orgasm, but he hesitated. He had stopped in the middle of a brutal thrust, now.. he began to pull back. Then the moment was over, and he brutally forced himself to the hilt into the small, abused body impaled on his cock, gritting his teeth as she convulsed, the cock sending one, two, three huge bursts of sperm into Dinky. Dinky was out of any semblance of will or strength, and collapsed back on her stomach, thick cum oozing her from her gaping ass. Permanent damage had been inflicted to her psyche on this beach, she was vaguely aware of that before she fell off the precarious edge of conscience she had been balancing on the last minute, into the embrace of darkness.

>>2549608
It had been ten minutes since Sorcanon had had his last orgasm. "Time to get up" Sorcanon said to Dinky. No reaction. "Get up!" Sorcanon repeated, raising his voice. Still no reaction. "Hey. Are you fucking deaf?" Sorcanon said, silently laughing to his joke. Sorcanon poked Dinky with tip of his boot. No reaction. She was dead. Again. "Fuck!". "She's gone." Sorcanon covered his head to his palm."She's gone." he thought again. "Wait...shes gone! She's gone!" Sorcanon yelled cheering, without noticing that he had in fact started to yell aloud. "Oh well...at least for some time. Guess she will obey me better next time..." "Now that she's gone (for awhile) I can do whatever I want." he realized. Sorcanon was still for a moment. "Oh what the hell," he thought, lighted cigar and went to sleep.

>>2549620
I am done! Spelling errors galore! enjoy.

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>>2549650
Goood! Goood...

>>2549667
Wait till I do the other four!

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>Sir Anonymous
>Looks for LOVE but is hated
>LOVE is tough

>Sir Anonymous
>Searches but cant seem to find...
>The mare of his dreams

>In Equestria
>Humans cannot be found here
>LOVE is 404

>Poor Anonymous
>Trapped in misery, but...
>LOVE was always there

>"So mister Anon..."
>Anon looks to Fluttershy
>"Do you want to be-"

>Anon hugs flutters
Fluttershy, do you LOVE me?
>Fluttershy hugs him

>"I LOVE you Anon..."
>Anon and Flutters both cry
>It was a swell day

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>>2549485

Pastebin is updated:
http://pastebin.com/u/bettyspaghetti

LW Spaghetti Sparkle 19 - Egghead Artist
http://pastebin.com/P2WCaK4W

Her DeviantART:
http://spaghettisparklechan.deviantart.com/
=======
Feedback is cool AND appreciated!

>>2549485

Enjoyable read.

Social ...student made me chuckle.

I'm starting to think her trolls have been a bad influence too.
She's not initiating trolling...yet, but she's definately getting a taste for it.
Wanting to troll back...
It's the first step.

Using her artwork as a means of starting a discussion on something she was feeling vulnerable about was... well, cute.

Looking forward to more.

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>>2549650
>>2549676

Parking and writing, later than I had hoped for, but whatever

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Guapo, Checking in.

>>2549676
Other.....four?

>>2549735
There's 11 in all, number 7 was actually purged for being too heretical.

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>>2549682

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>>2549755

been writing something the basic story i have so far is
anon turns up in equestria
after a while anon somehow turns into a pegasus pony
rainbow trys to teach anon how to fly but anon has lots of trouble

it needs a fair amount of work and isnt ready to be posted, i just wanted to know if anyone was interested so it wouldnt be a waste of time

Tripfags in Equestria.

how fast are these threads moving? i was just on last night to read check any stories after i went to sleep but it was gone. the only one i found is the one right before this and i skimmed over that. Redhawk damn you! how many did i miss?

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>>2549440
I don't know why, but that last part..

Why do I have all these feels?
..my body wasn't ready for that

>>2549934
Turning into a pegasus seems a bit ridiculous, but with the proper reason it could make sense. I sense some scootaloo bonding with the flying difficulty as well. I'm guessing this would turn into a AnonxRainbow story, but there could always be something else.

I myself am not much of a fan if there isn't violence of some sort (and a lot of it), but there are plenty of others who'd love to read it. Just some of my thoughts.

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>>2549370
>>2549682

[I FORGOT TO PUT THIS IN THE STORY. IT SLIPPED MY MIND]
[This takes place between parts 1/x and 2/x]

>an hour passes
>you've both been lazing around in bed
>you've been browsing the internet on your phone
>Twilight's taken a break from her DeviantART, only to be wrapped up in Naruto comics
>she turns to you
>Twi:"Could you take a picture of me?"
Why?
>Twi:"You baka. I want to remember this moment!"
O-okay.
>you get up and grab your phone
>you're about to snap the shot when she says,
>Twi:"Stop! Hold on I need to put my book away."
>she closes the Naruto volume she was reading and places it on the bed-stand
Okay, you ready now?
>Twi:"Um..."
>she pulls the blanket off of herself so you can see her entire body
>Twi:"T-take a sexy picture? Please?"
>she's blushing
>you take the picture
>Twi:"Let me see!"
>you crouch down and show it to her
>Twi:"Hmm... I don't like it. Take another one."
>she makes a sexy pose
>her expression tells you she's uncomfortable
You sure?
>Twi:"Um... actually no. How about this!"
>she gets under the covers and peeks her little head out
>you smile
>it's cute
Okay. You ready?
>Twi:"Wait!"
What now?
>she scrambles for her Naruto comicbook
>Twi:"Okay! Now!"

http://spaghettisparklechan.deviantart.com/art/me-in-bed-307367060

PART 1.5

>>2549934
Sounds like an interesting comedy if that's the direction you plan on taking it. Stuff about Anon crashing into buildings or generally making a nuisance of himself during practice. I'd read it and as long as it's Anonymous having adventures alongside ponies in Equestria I'm sure people wouldn't have a problem with it. We get all sorts of stories and this almost sounds like a change from the norm which isn't a bad thing if done correctly. I say go for it but that's my two cents.

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Don't you guys love surprise 1-hour delays?

Because I fucking LOVE surprise 1-hour delays.

Back to writing

>>2549934

I'd like to see it.

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>>2550105
I D'awwed pretty hard at that
>>2549755
I....but.......how....
MFW, pic related
<------------

>>2549934
Kind of agreeing with this anon>>2550130, but you might want to think of what anon's cutie mark is that doesn't break the fact that he's an anon a question mark. Otherwise it's time for CMC adventures with an slightly unsettling age difference.

>>2550036
It's slowly picking back up after our short slump.
Back up to about....maybe a thread and a half a day?

>>2550344
its been like 25 hours since i went to bed. how many threads 404d since then?

>>2550179
Number 5 will star Betty, Tibbs, Sorc, and Ponygone.

>>2549440
So.
I haven't felt like this since Sherm's Lyra arc. Please write more... I need a happy ending ASAP.

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Just spitballing here, but I'd expect Table for Two around midnight tonight.

Save room.

>>2550375
Not sure, don't keep us with when they actually 404, sorry.

A: Continue GRiE
B: Start New Story out of the Following ideas: Dragonborn, Space Cowboy, Mystery Box
C: Continue GRiE and start one of 3 ideas

>>2550399
oh dear jesus, the dubs confirm it.

>>2550565
D. I have a fever, and the only prescription, is more Hunger Games.

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>>2550407
>>2550040

Feels accomplished. You guys want a happy Trixie? c:

>>2550481
did atlas post QL? or did Aether post Z-Week last night? i hope not.
also did techy or heshi?

>>2550593
Haven't I told you I'm already working on it?
Now, please pick a valid option, for Equestrian Hunger Games is in the making

>>2550565
continue GRiE mofo.
start another if you like, but dont overwhelm yourself. its always good to have an alternate title or two to vent or get around writers block.

>>2550648
Not sure about Techy or Heshi, I don't follow either.

But Atlas didn't post QL, and Aether did Applerape last night instead of Z-week I believe.

>>2550565
A
If you do B and start something new though, try to avoid a crossover.

>>2550648
We got an update of miscast from techy last night. We also have some newer stuff from Heshi in his pastebin, but it wasn't in the thread

>>2550565
D. HungerGames
or
Mystery Box ;D
Feeling the LOVE

>>2550667
A then, you spoil sport.

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>>2550629
That would be nice.
But.. I don't know.
If it was never your intentions, then don't. I really like the stories as they are, lots of feels in nice edible "chapters".

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>>2550671

Aww :c

>>2550794

I love separating the chapters JUST so. Also, don't worry, everything is going according to plan. And oh boy do I have a plan. :3

>>2550835
>>2550835
God I love that image...

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>>2550669
25 hours you say? Considering the last thread started about 22 hours ago you probably just missed the last part of the one that 404'd. Threads been a bit slower than usual lately.

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>>2550105

Spaghetti Sparkle has a fleshsona

http://spaghettisparklechan.deviantart.com/#/d53ib72

>>2550105
Are those supposed to be audio files or are you just putting brackets?

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>>2551218

Those are just brackets. It's me telling you that I fucked up and forgot to post that part of the story.

Hey, whatever happened to MDR-V6?

He never finished his story?

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>>2551038
End of the first arc. It's storytelling time. http://pastebin.com/u/Sorcanon
"Rarity!?"
>You let out a shocked shout as Rarity topples to the floor, out cold.
>Fluttershy, surprisingly, doesn't seem all that fazed.
>You make your way to the unconscious pony, unsure of what to do.
>You turn around and look at Fluttershy behind you.
"Does she...does she do this often?"
>Fluttershy starts to answer, then she lets out a tiny squeak and throws up a hoof in front of her eyes.
>"Umm...yes...but could you, ummm, cover up, please?"
>Huh?
>You look down. Oh, right, dong.
>You dash out of the room.
>Rarity surely won't mind you borrowing some of her fabric for some makeshift cl-
>Turning the corner, you find a shabby, torn set of clothing. Your old clothing, stitched up and shined.
>You smile. You were sure she'd thrown those old duds away. You should have known better. She'd been saving them as a gift for yo-
>Was that...sobbing?
>You put your old-new clothes on and rush back into the room, only to encounter a pretty awkward sight.
>Fluttershy consoling a crying Rarity, awkwardly patting her on the back and hugging her.
>There is no way that wings that stiff can be in any way healthy.
>"Wha-what do you mean she's m-missing! Was she f-foal napped? I k-knew I shouldn't have l-left her!"
>The rest of what she was about to say breaks down into incoherent crying.

>>2551571
>There is no way that wings that stiff can be in any way healthy.
Wut?

exhausted from boss leaving every bit of bullshit to me today while he went out of town.

Probably not writing, and if I do, not well. Lurkin'

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>>2551571
>"Sssshhhhhh"
>Fluttershy runs a hoof through Rarity's mane as the white pony sobs onto her shoulder.
>"I...I'm sure we'll find her. She can't have gotten far, could she?"
>Fluttershy looks at you for support.
>You give a very slow shrug. How the hell were you supposed to know how far a baby marshmallow could wander?
>Rarity goes into hysterics again.
>"But w-what if there's nop0ny to find! W-what if s-something in the forest hurt her, or worse!? What if..."
>Rarity's hooves tense, and Fluttershy eeps at the sudden pressure.
>"Blueblood."
>There's enough venom in that single word to poison a kingdom.
>"Blueblood did this. Its part of his little scheme, isn't it!?"
>"I...I don't..."
>"He wants to hurt me by going after Sweetie Belle! When I get my hooves on him, I'll..."
"Uh, Rarity?"
>Immediately, Rarity whirls and turns a terrifying smile on you.
>"Anonymous! How good to see you! I'll need you to help me strangle Blueblood. Those fingers of yours will be quite useful."
"Rarity, calm down. I don't know who the hell that is, and I'm sure whatever he did it was terrible and he deserves whatever's coming to him, but we need to find Sweetie Belle first."
>Rarity closes her eyes for a moment, and sighs.
>"Of course. I...I'm sorry. I just lost my head for a moment."
>Fluttershy smiles as she lets go of Rarity.
>"That's okay, Rarity. It's just...what are we going to do?"
>Rarity frowns.
>"We're going to find her, of course. We'll scour the Everfree until she's found!"

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Quickly reporting in to say I'm still alive and working hard. You get so much done when you haven't got five different threads open simultaneously.

>>2549205

>During Anon's stay in Canterlot he happens to come across Luna's Room, he in turn finds out about her gaming 'addiction' and soon the two become friends.

Have you been reading my notes for the sequel to /V/irgin In Equestria?

#2 gets my vote anyway, I look forward to what you have in store.

>>2550565
It's decided
C with either Space Cowboy or Mystery Box

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>>2551860
>Fluttershy is immediately terrified, her stiff wings falling flat as she shivers.
>"B-but Rarity, it's the E-Everfree Forest! We c-can't-"
>Rarity turns to her, and rebukes her very gently.
>"Fluttershy, dear, I know you're afraid of the Everfree Forest, quite reasonably, I must add, but my sister is in danger. I need your help."
>She smiles softly at Fluttershy, who quietly nods her head in acceptance.
>"O..okay. But the girls! Shouldn't we g-get them?"
>Rarity shakes her head in the negative.
>"We don't have time, Fluttershy. Sweetie could be in serious danger as we speak! There's a...that thing, Fluttershy. That monster could be after her!"
>Fluttershy nods solemnly, before looking over Rarity's shoulder and cocking an eyebrow at you, as if to say "you havn't told her yet?"
>You shake your head, frowning.
>Fluttershy closes her eyes, whether in acceptance or annoyance, you're not sure.
"Alright, Rarity. We'll find Sweetie Belle, I promise. She probably just got a little lost. We'll spend all day if we have to."
>Rarity nods at you, smiling.
>"Of course! And all night! I'll meet the pair of you outside! I have to get something first!"

Ok so I'm getting ready to post the prologue to my story Road to redemption... It gives Anon's back story and his life leading up to his arrival in Equestria ...enjoy

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For anyone who may be interested, I am writing up QL now, I'm just taking a break to actually read SS.
Hot damn my sides.
Either way, sorry it's taking forever to finish this, I'm not used to writing clop so I really have no idea what I'm doing.

>A cool night’s breeze blows through the windows and across your tired face
>The night is making its usual array of noises accompanied by the soft sound of rain
>Your once neatly trimmed facial hair has been replaced with a rough unsightly beard
>It has been many years since you last pulled that trigger
>You remember the day you made your official retirement
>You close your eyes to remember the life you have lived for so long
- - -
>You were an assassin
>Your boss had been a father to you since the day he found you on the streets
>He taught you everything he knew; he turned you into something seemingly unstoppable
>You were his best friend, his son, and his weapon
>In time, he let you in on his past life as an assassin
>Soon he received assignments and passed them onto you
>You remembered everything he told you before your first time out
>”Don’t be afraid, these are bad people who deserve what they get”
>He told you the people you would be “taking care” of were drug dealers, gangsters, and other bad citizens

>>2552305

>Before you left for that first assignment he gave you something
>It was a tactical 1911 with a suppressor and a cold steel oss knife
>The first kill was the hardest
>Within your first year you had eliminated a lot of the major criminals in the area
>You found it easier knowing that those who died deserved their punishment…you hated the idea of hurting those who were innocent
>But that all changed… soon you found yourself dispatching government officials, detectives, and other figures of authority
>Before long you had lost count of those you killed and your mind had become an emotionless abyss
>But deep down inside you had retained your sanity and you hated yourself for becoming a mindless murderer
>You wanted to do good not evil and then you snapped
>You read the order for a target, some girl, pursuing a career in the medical field, carrying out an internship at the local hospital
>It was midnight and you set out for your target, but things didn’t feel right
>You couldn’t imagine what she could have done wrong, but whatever it was it must have been serious
>There you were waiting in a parking garage for some girl you were supposed to kill
>She begins a walk to her car and you snap out of your state of reflection
>Beginning your slow walk from the shadows, you creep up behind her
>She turns as you raise your gun to its resting place about an inch from her temple
>For a brief second her eyes meet yours; they are a beautiful light green, unlike anything you have ever seen before
>They become teary and the expression she gives you is one of scared innocence
>Your heart sinks as you speak
“I’m sorry”

>>2552326

>You pull the trigger
>The sound of brass hitting the ground and a soft thump of her lifeless body bring you to your knees
>All the emotion you had repressed, all the hatred you had for the creature you had become, came rushing out of you as you cry over her lifeless body
>She was innocent…and you killed her
>You stand, pick up your gun, and begin to walk back to the place you call home
>It is raining outside as you reach home…
>You are broken and done with this life
>you walk into your “Father’s” room
>He is lying down, but turns to meet your lost expression
>Reality sinks in and his old eyes grow wide
>You pull the trigger and silence follows
>After that night, you ran and kept running before finding your way to an abandoned house in the middle of nowhere
>In time you had fixed it up enough to call it home
>Living off the land was rough at first but you soon got the hang of it
>3 years pass and you have felt safe and detached from everything for a fair amount of time
>Until now…

>>2552186
>'Fluttershy, dear, I know you're afraid of the Everfree Forest'

Ahh doesn't Fluttershy live right next to it?

She is the only mane 6 that goes in there willingly too (Season 2: Stare Master)

>>2552354

- - -
>Your eyes open as you inhale
>You gaze to the floor and whisper to yourself
“All I ever wanted was to help those around me”
>You look out towards the quiet moon
“If I could make it all okay…I would”
>As you finish your outward though you notice something unusual
>All the crickets, owls, and other noises of the night seem to have stopped
>An odd feeling in the pit of your stomach forms
>Your heart starts beating out of control as the sound of gunfire breaks the eerie silence
>Bullets start shredding through your home as you hit the ground and begin crawling towards your gear
>You grab your gun, 2 spare magazines and your knife
>The gunfire ceases
>Your adrenaline is pumping as you hear voices and footsteps moving towards your bullet riddled home
>The door is kicked in and in steps a man in a black suit
>You spin as you stand and bring your pistol to his chest and put 3 rounds through him
>You break for the front door and as you run through it you meet with another one of your attackers about to make his way in
>Your left arm swings outward sending your knife into his heart as your right arm swings with it to bring your gun to his face; you pull the trigger
>You pull your knife from the dead man’s torso and see another man raising a gun towards you from about 10 feet away
>You raise your right arm with lightning speed and empty the last 4 rounds into your attacker with ease
>All is quiet as you reload your pistol
>You steadily make your way around the side of your house
>You hear a shout
“This is for Your Father”

>>2552378

>You turn as a bullet collides with your chest
>Your gaze meets a man, dressed like the others, walking towards you firing away
>As another bullet hits you, you begin walking towards him, raising your gun and firing in a steady rhythm
>You to continue walking towards each other, firing away
>About 5 feet from each other his gun lets out a metallic click, signaling that it has fired its last shot
>You fire the last bullet out of your gun and it hits his temple
>His body falls back and hits the mud
>You chuckle in a short-lived moment of victory before you fall to your knees
>http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gUQuBBBzx-I
>You look down at yourself, rain washing down your body, mixed with blood
>You think to yourself as you sit there in silence
“Damn… what beautiful night…”
>You chuckle once more and look up at the stars
>You remember your life, the girl you killed, the night you walked into your “father’s” room and killed him…the time you spent running away, and everything you wish you could have changed through the years
>You release your final breath
>Your body slumps forward as the world around you fades into a blackness

>A soft voice whispers through the dark abyss
“The road to redemption is a hard one, good luck”

>>2552395

>You feel a tender breeze brush past your face and the warm rays of the sun beating down on your body
>Your eyes slowly open only to be met with blinding light
>You sit upright and Inhale deeply
>The air is cool and fresh
“This can’t be happening”
>You check yourself over and notice you are wearing your black combat boots, black jeans, black shirt and vest, and your lightweight black leather trench coat
>In your vest you find your empty 1911 with the suppressor still attached, 1 loaded magazine, and your knife
>You notice your hair is neat and pulled back reaching the bottom of your neck
“Just how I like it”
>Your facial hair is trimmed in a style similar to Johnny Depp
“Well, I’ll be damned…this is one hell of a dream”
>It’s almost as if you were back to your old self
>Still having trouble facing what is going on, you check to see if you have a pulse
>You do…
>You pinch yourself, expecting to not feel a thing, but you feel everything…
“Well shit…This is really happening”
>You look around and notice an eerie looking forest about a hundred yards ahead of you
>And far off to your right there is an odd looking town
“Ok…This clearly isn’t home, so, how did I get here”
>You stand and think out loud
“Ok, Well… I was an assassin, I ran away from my problem for some reason, there was gunfire, and then there was darkness, and a voice, the voice said the road to redemption is a—“
>”HEY Whyareyoutalkingtoyours--“
>”AGHHHH”, you scream as you spin around and fall on your back
>”Oh my gosh I’m so sorry I didn’t mean to scare you”
>You look up to see a bright and smiling pink pony looking at you
>As you stare at it all you can think is what the fuck?
“What the fuck”
>You fall back and black out

>>2552414

That's it... The Prologue to Road to Redemption
Feedback?

Will be on Pastebin in a moment

Pastebin.com/u/LateNightAnon

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>>2552186
>Seconds later, you and Fluttershy are shoved outside of Carousel Boutique by Rarity's magic.
>Fluttershy lands with an adorable "oomph," while you just sort of tumble and collapse.
"What the hell was that about!?"
>Fluttershy glances at you.
>"I...uh, think she didn't want us to see whatever it was that she's, umm, getting."
"Not that, Fluttershy. The wing thing. That looked uncomfortable as hell."
>Fluttershy's face turns a ferocious shade of crimson.
>"I..uh..oh my, it's...uh"
>The pegasus starts sputtering, and you raise an eyebrow as she works herself up into a shameful frenzy.
"Uh. Never mind, I guess. I'll ask later."
>Fluttershy is quiet for a long time.
>"T-thanks."
>You give out a meaningless grunt and lean against the house as the pair of you wait for Rarity.
>Stuck outside with little miss yellow and quiet, was there a worse fa-
>"Why havn't you told her, Anonymous?"
>You flinch.
"I...well. I can't. How could I?"
>"Ummm, what do you mean, you can't? She needs to-"
"I just CAN'T, Fluttershy!"
>Fluttershy gives out a quiet whimper, and you immediately feel like an ass.
"I'm sorry. I just can't, okay. I can't."
>"But...why?"
"If I do...she'll hate me, Fluttershy. She'll fear me. And I'll lose her. I can't-"
>The door bangs open, and Fluttershy shrieks while you jump.
>"I FOUND IT!"
>Rarity trots outside, a long composite bow slung over her shoulder, on top of an elaborate saddlebag.
>Filled with silver arrows.
>"Now. Let's go find Sweetie Belle!"

Reporting in.
For my 2 readers out there, Part 1 of the Baltimare Grand Prix is finished. Writing up part 2 now. Both will be posted sometime soon.

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>>2552456
>Holy shit where did you get all those fucking arrows Rarity!?
>"Oh. I simply melted down some old silverware. Fletching isn't my strong suit, but I do think I've done a good job. Nobleponies tend to find it absolutely charming when a pony makes her own arrows."
>Oh shit you said that out loud, didn't you?
>You take a deep,shuddering breath, trying to damper the sudden intense anxiety you feel.
>You gulp, and Fluttershy glances at you with a worried expression on her yellow face.
>"Anon, are you alright?"
"Fine, just fine. What's the...err, bow for?"
>Rarity starts trotting off, still speaking, while you and Fluttershy follow her at a more reasoned pace.
>"That thing came after me last night, Anonymous. I won't be caught unawares again. When we fought it in the caves, I remember it fearing a silver spear. If we find it this time...if it hurt Sweetie Belle..."
>Her voice grows dangerously cold, and you shiver.
>"I'll kill it."
>You think about it. What you would do if you woke up with Sweetie Belle's corpse in front of you?
"It might want you to."
>"What was that, Anon?"
"Nothing, Rarity."
>Fluttershy gives you an alarmed glance, and you shake your head.
>Rarity eyes you over her shoulder.
>"Oh...alright then. Well come along! The Everfree is right next to Ponyville, but we need all the time we can get!"
>She hurries off, and you follow her, heedless of the looks Fluttershy is giving you.
>You meant it.
>If you hurt Sweetie Belle, or Fluttershy, or Rarity's friends, or the rest of the CMC...
>If you hurt Rarity...
>You would want to be killed.
>The three of you charge through Ponyville's streets, running headlong into the Everfree Forest.

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>>2552798
>Your first thought about the Everfree was that it was...dark.
>It was daytime, afternoon, maybe, you weren't sure, but the forest was dark as night.
>And it was alive.
>You still remembered trying to point the dark half towards this set of woods, your first night.
>You remembered how it had smelled the loam, and the green smells, and the spoor of other predators, and turned away.
>There were dark things here, things that chittered and roared and slithered between the roots of the trees.
>Understandably, you were fucking terrified. So was Fluttershy.
>Rarity, though...
>"SWEETIE BELLE! SWEETIE, CAN YOU HEAR US!?"
"Rarity you're going to bring this whole fucking forest down on us."
>She glares at you.
>"And? If Sweetie can find us, that's a risk I'm willing to take."
>Can't argue with that logic, really.
"Fluttershy, can you try to fly over the trees, see if you can spot her from above, maybe?"
>An incoherent whimper is your only response.
>This was a terrible way to start a hunt.
>You'd find her soon, though. You had to.

Parking.

Live and dance and laugh and lie,
LOVE the reeling midnight through,
For tomorrow we shall die!
But alas, we never do.

>>2553126
Feeling the LOVE

11 posts and 3300 words done, 9 posts to go.

Man, I hope I can get this done tonight...

slow thread is sloooowwww
so im parking, gonna write some younganon. timsekips are about to occur for once. eventually day-to-day stops being interesting, y'know?

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Alright, anyone who reads my stories, what do you want to see more of?

Miscast
Bar Scene
Anon P.I.
Just Like You

parking my ass right here

>>2553579
Miscast please

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>>2553032
"Rarity, you two need to rest."
>"Anonymous, we cant! You know we can't. We have to find her! I have to find her!"
"Rarity, look at Fluttershy!"
>The yellow pegasus, upon realizing you've all stopped, has fallen onto her own face.
>"M'fine. Less keep going."
"See!"
>Rarity slows to a stop, trotting in place as a manic look comes over her face.
>"We CAN'T stop! We just can't!"
"Rarity, have you slept since last night?"
>...No."
"Then you need to rest. You can't keep up a pace like this and stay sane! You're going to drop dead of exhaustion."
>Rarity stops trotting in place, but lets out another sigh, a few hairs sticking out of place in her mane.
>"Alright. Okay. Five minutes. Then we search more."
>You sigh as Rarity collapses on her flank, muttering to herself.
>She then promptly falls asleep
>You turn to Fluttershy.
"Are you gonna be okay?"
>"Gonna be...just fine...need to...catch breath."
"You rest, okay? Watch over Rarity. Make sure she's alright. I'm gonna keep looking."
>"Why...sit down...you gotta be...tired..."
"I'll be fine. And, Fluttershy, its almost, you know, night. I want to be far away from you guys if...that happens."
>Fluttershy shakes her head, trying to get her breath back.
>"Pick..pick me up, Anonymous."
"Uh, what?"
>"Take me...with you. Can't let...that thing out...here. Could hurt Rarity...or find Sweetie Belle before we do. I can...Stare it."
>Stare? You have no idea what that is, but it has to be whatever she did to keep that thing in check that time you were tied up in her house.
"Alright, Fluttershy. Hop on. You're riding piggyback. We'll search until the sun sets."

>>2553579
I rike miscast

>>2553579
just like you

I also just edited my stuff, so no more terrible spelling errors and bad grammar
(I was really stoned yesterday)

>>2553306
I feel the need for mutilation.

>>2553579
Just like you!

Does inter species sex with the ponies and actually having children make the sex ok?

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Okay posting some mutation Anon now. At least what I have so far. Here is pastebin if any of you want to catch up. http://pastebin.com/LP0f8WBb
> “Sure thing Mister Anon!”
>Damn, this girl needs to lower the volume.
>Ah, well she is a cute little bugger.
>The two of you make your way towards the stadium.
>It's a pretty peaceful flight. Most of the cl-
>“HEY! Anon how much longer?”
>It was a peaceful flight.
“We are almost there kid.”
>SlipStream lets out a long groan.
>“Ugh, this is taking forever. I want to see the WonderBolts now.”
>She is going to regret saying that.
“You really want to get there sooner squirt?”
>“Yeah I do!”
>You begin to chuckle.
>This is going to be fun.
“Okay SlipStream. Come here and hold on to me.”
>SlipStream hesitates, but she obeys your order.
>She wraps her hooves around your waist.
>“Umm, what now?”
“Just don't let go.”
>Before the young filly can open up her legendary yapper. You burst off towards the stadium.
>A large trail of fire begins to appear from behind you, and a large cone of air begins to form around your body.

>>2553579

Miscast. While your other 3 stories I read and are great, I'm more drawn to Miscast.

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>>2553688
>You can barley make out the faint screams coming from SlipStream.
>You begin to laugh.
“You better be holding on tight, because I'm going to pick up the passe.”
>“You can go faster?!”
>The cone begins to get smaller, and smaller. Eventually you break through it.
>Once you break through a rainbow begins form behind you, but this rainbow is on fucking fire!
>HAHA! Hell yeah. Wait till the guys see this.
>SlipStream has lost all of her color in her face. She is pale, and has her eyes closed in fear most likely.
>You fly right over the WonderBolts stadium. You fly around it for a few times. You then land right smack-dab in the middle of the stadium.
>You look around the stadium. The stands are empty. This place is awesome when it's empty. No noise so you can think straight. Plus-
>“What the hay was that Anon?!”
>You turn around and see the whole WonderBolt team staring at you. Their mouths were practically touching the ground.
“Oh, hey guys.”
>You try to hide a smile, but you are just way to proud of what you've accomplished.
>Misty runs up to you.
>“That was amazing Anon! I've never seen something so awesome before!”
“That, oh that's nothing. Just something I made up today.”
>The p0nies start asking you a million questions. Like how did it feel, and how you did it.
>FireStreak and Blaze stood off to the side. They were shooting their heart piercing stares towards you.
>Fucking pricks.

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So, show of posts: who's hungry for some Table for Two?

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>>2553687
As long as it's in the missionary position.

>>2553744
niggerz

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>>2553735
>FleetFoot finally changes the subject.
>“Umm, Anon?”
“Yes FleetFoot?”
>She points towards your waist.
>“Who is this?”
>You look down to see that SlipStream is still holding onto to you.
“Oh, this is SlipStream. She is the reason why I'm so late.”
>SpitFire walks towards SlipStream, and pats her on the head.
>“That was a crazy ride. Huh, Kid?”
>SlipStream opens her eyes to see that her hero is right there in front of her.
>SlipStream quickly snaps out of her little phase, and begins to jump around around SpitFire.
>“You saw that!? Wow! I was so scared, but we were going soooo fast too! It was amazing! My brain was like boom! When he did his sonic rain boom!”
>Sonic rainboom?
>“He was like whoosh! And I was like ahh! It was so fun.”
>Spitfire begins to chuckle.
>“Sounds like it kid.”
“Sorry for interrupting. But what is a sonic rainboom?”
>Surprise clears her throat.
>“A sonic rainboom is when a p0ny breaks the sound barrier, and because of that p0nies sheer speed it creates a rainbow. That's what it is. Just a little dumbed down.”
“Has any one else done this before?”
> “One, but she isn't ready to join us. She has her own path to follow first.”
>FleetFoot announced this to everyp0ny. Like she was trying to make it clear to some of the p0nies.
“Oh, I guess that makes sense.”
>Not really. FleetFoot is just a philosophical freak sometimes.

Anyone want some "A Pony (Anon) in (Human) Equestria"?

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>>2553744

Let's hit it.


>You walk along the edge of the crag further into the waste ahead of you.
>A Rainbow streak flew across the sky and touched down just ahead of you. "I looked ahead, no sign of any trouble." Rainbow said.
>She had insisted on coming along with you to look for crystals today, something about Diamond Dogs and the last time they came out here.
>"Are you really expecting that much trouble, Dash?" you ask.
>Rainbow hovers a few feet off the ground as her head darts to and fro. "I told you, Anon. The last time any of us came out here, Rarity ended up kidnapped. No way I'm letting that happen to you."
>How sweet. "My knight in pastel armor." you tease.
>The two of you continue your trek until you reach the rocky outskirts you came for.
>It was quiet here.
>REALLY quiet. You didn't even hear birds.
>"Stay close, Anon." Rainbow says.
>"You know, Anon's not my real name." you say.
>It was true, the two of you had made up names on the spot when you came here and just rolled with them, you probably would have just used your real one if you had known you'd be here for a year and a half.

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>>2553766
“Anyways, why did you guys call me here today?”
>FleetFoot stands at attention, the other p0nies follow her lead.
>“Thank you for reminding me Anon. Today we call you to ask you of something. It is a great honor and a privilege to join our ranks. We have never had a none p0ny join the WonderBolts, but today we ask that you become a part of us. To join us in the sky, and to call yourself a WonderBolt.”
>Here comes that cheesy ass grin again.
“I accept FleetFoot.”
>“Anon I here by dub you the 13th WonderBolt!”
>The p0nies begin to chant your name.
>Once they finish they swarm you, and start patting you on the back. Congratulating you. Letting you know that it's going to be fun, and that you are going to have to practice all the time.
>You will practice 24/7 if it means that you can be WonderBolt.
>SlipStream begins to fly around you cheering.
>“YAY! My best friend is a WonderBolt now!”
>Best friend. Holy shit you mean a lot to this p0ny.
“Heh, thanks SlipStream. So are you ready for me take you home?”
> “Umm, I can get there by myself just fine.”
>You shake your head at the little filly.
“I couldn't do that to my best friend. I want to meet your parents too. I think they need to know about what happened today too.”
>Misty walks up to your side and smiles.
>“I will come too. I've been here all day, and I want to spend some time with my man.”
>You turn towards Misty and smile.

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>>2553734
>>2553672
>>2553644
>>2553636
>>2553621
OH GOD SO MANY RESPONSES.

Okay, let's compromise here. It's been a while since the last Just Like You, so I'll do one of those, then another chapter of Miscast! How's that?

>>2553839
JA

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>>2553831
“Well it's decided. I won't be taking no for an answer.”
>SlipStream looks down at the ground.
>A small tear hits the ground.
>You walk over to the small filly and wrap your arm around her.
“Hey, are you okay?”
>She shakes her head.
>“N-no I'm not.”
“What's up? Are you embarrassed, or are you scared of getting in trouble with your parents?”
>SlipStream shakes her head.
>“No it's not that.”
>She looks up at you. A stream of tears are rolling down her face.
>You wrap your arms around her.
“Hey, hey, you don't cry. Please don't cry.”
>“I don't have a mommy or daddy okay?”
“W-What?”
>“They ran off a long time ago. It's only been me and the park.”
>What the fuck man.
>This is some fucked up shit. You would have never imagined that a p0ny would do this to their child.
“I'm so sorry SlipStream I didn't know.”
>“I'm sorry. I'm just going to leave now before I ruin your lives too!”
>SlipStream darts up into the air.
>You go to follow, but Misty stops you.
>“Maybe I should talk to her. You know mare to mare.”

>>2553820
>Rainbow glances back at you. "So, what -is- your name?" she asks.
>You motion Rainbow down and grab her ear.
>She listens intently as you whisper the name you dropped into it.
>She pulls away afterwards. "So, that's what names are like where you come from?" she asks.
>You nod. "Pretty much. But they're a bit different depending on where you go in the world."
>Rainbow puts her hoof on her chin and thinks. "Nah. You'll always be Anon to us."
>"What, you don't like my name?" you ask with feigned offense.
>Rainbow gets a smarmy grin. "It's not the worst name. But I met Anon, not that other guy."
>She might have a point there.
>"Well, Anon and the other guy both think we should get what we need here." you say as you start walking again.
>If this place was as dangerous as Rainbow said it was, you wanted to leave quick.

>>2553755
God damn. You sick bastard!

>>2553744
Famished.

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Hooray for two serious responses!

Table for Two between 12 and 1

>>2553790
me

>>2553871
>This place felt wrong.
>The silence you noticed earlier was even more prevalent now.
>There was no life out here, just rocks and dirt.
>The sound of the wind over stone was your only indicator that you hadn't gone deaf, and even that seemed quieter.
>Rainbow had decided to walk some time ago, the atmosphere of the area pushing her to the ground.
>"Real inviting, this place..." you joke, trying to lift the mood.
>Rainbow doesn't respond to your joke and the mood stays below rock bottom.
>You and Twilight had jury-rigged a crystal to be able to detect other ones in the area, but you were only getting faint readings.
>"Is there any other part of this place we're missing?"
>Rainbow shuffles her hooves a bit. "There is one part..." she starts. "The Diamond Dogs who kidnapped Rarity took her to some underground tunnels." she points over a hill. "Somewhere in that direction."
>That sounded promising. "Alright! Let's go." you say, your spirits raised.
>"Whoa, hold on!" Rainbow yelled. She sped in front of you and stopped you in your tracks. "We are NOT going back in there! What if the Diamond Dogs are still there?"
>"Come on Dash, it's been how long since you were last here? Those Diamond Dogs have all probably cleared out by now." you say as you try to push past her.
>"Anon, no! I may play fast and loose sometimes, but even I know this is a bad idea." she says stopping you.
>You lower Rainbows hoof from your chest. "Dash, I have to get these crystals for my research. It'll just be in and out." you say. "Besides, I have you to protect me."
>Rainbow's face softens at the faith you put in her. "Okay, but just a quick visit..." she says as she leads you to the cave.

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>>2553790
>mfw

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>>2553687
I don't see how it'd be wrong to begin with.
There's a difference between xenophilia and bestiality.

Pic related, it's still bestiality.

A Pony (Anon) in (Human) Equestria

Chapter 1
http://pastebin.com/KALd4J4k

Chapter 2
http://pastebin.com/g8d1qJ9z

Chapter 3
http://pastebin.com/QSxC7brQ

Chapter 4
http://pastebin.com/nfUnJrdg

Chapter 5
http://pastebin.com/cAnhNR5g

Chapter 6
http://pastebin.com/p59WxMYM

captcha: list heecov

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>>2553622
>Fluttershy is actually kind of heavier then you'd expected.
>You keep walking along the Everfree path, calling out softly for Sweetie Belle every few yards.
>So far, there's been no response, no animals screaming, no filly running out to you.
>Just silence and fear. A sour smell reaches your nostrils as your senses slowly grow sharper, the sense of many things fleeing one greater thing.
>The stench of prey.
>The sun has been sinking lower and lower on the horizon.
"Fluttershy."
>Soft snoring greets your query as you slow down.
"Fluttershy, I need you to wake up."
>You set her down quietly, glancing around.
>As what little light penetrates the Everfree canopy begins to dim, another smell reaches your senses.
>Blood. A lot of it. Spilled quickly.
>But you can't see any of it.
>You gently prod the pegasus, and she yawns at you.
>"Anonymous?"
"It's...Fluttershy it's that time. I need you to do whatever it is you do to keep it in check. And I need it now."
>You glance up at the sky, worry tracing its way down your spine as your senses begin to shift.
>"S-sure Anonymous. I-I'll try. Just, umm, get on your back."
>You raise an eyebrow at her, but comply.
>She trots over to you.
>"Now look in my eyes. If I get...it...before it has a chance to look away, I can keep it still for a while. Long enough for Rarity to find Sweetie, I hope."
>You nod, your ability to listen rapidly slipping away as the sun sets.
>You stare into Fluttershy's eyes, and freeze as those blue pools start to suck you in.
>There is a quiet rustling from the bushes, and Fluttershy turns her head.
>"Sweetie Belle?"
>Is that really Swee-

>>2553918
>The locater spell trapped inside the crystal lead you further then "just a quick visit".
>You were well underground by now, passing by empty mine carts and steel doors.
>Rainbow got more and more nervous as you went deeper. "Hey, look sharp. Walk around like you own the place." you tell her.
>Mous used to tell you that when you got worried, you probably could used him about now.
>The locator crystal reacts to a nearby wall. You motion to Rainbow. "Stand back."
>You pull out a small green crystal out of your pouch and throw it at the wall. The crystal shatters and bathes the wall with a green light.
>The light washes over the rock and seems to dissolve it as it goes, revealing a collection of crystals underneath it.
>The light dies down. "Alright!" you exclaim as you examine your bounty with your magnifier.
>Deep node crystals as you expected, decent quality, about five interior refractions...
>"I telling you, saw light from over here!" a voice said in the darkness.
>Oh. Shit. You could hear their footsteps, there sounded like a few of them.
>"And I telling you, there no light here! We the only ones in these tunnels!"
>They come from around the corner at the end of the tunnel. Three of them, short, center, and tall. They had maces and spears on them.
>Diamond Dogs.

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Dropping in, posting Chapter 2 of Utopia

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Continuing from http://pastebin.com/p59WxMYM

>You arrive at Rarity's shop
>You walk in and hear the bell jingle
>Rarity: "Oh hello Anon, I have the suit ready"
"Thanks Rarity"
>Rarity: "Yes. Well I am glad I had the measurements done quickly and tailored it as soon as possible"
"How much do I owe you?"
>Rarity: "Nothing dear"
>She bends down and grabs your muzzle
>Rarity: "Nothing, I am the Saint of Generosity and I can't charge an unfortunate person an expensive suit"
>Shes taking pity on you but you don't care
>She helps you put the semi-complete suit on
>Rarity: "Seems it fits right, how does it feel Anon?"
"Feels good Rarity"
>Rarity: "Good, see you at the funeral"
"Yeah, it's around at three"
>You leave her shop and head over to Twilight's
1/x
(Don't think about what you know about saints, in this story the mane six are holy but are not called St. Twilight or St. Fluttershy till after death)

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>>2553865
“Okay, just be careful.”
>Misty kisses you on the check, then flies off towards SlipStream.
>“See you at home Anon!”
>Then she was gone.
>Poor kid. You really hope Misty can help the little filly. If not, no p0ny can.
>SpitFire tugs on pants to your attention.
>“You okay Anon?”
“Yeah I'm fine. It's just that kid worries me, and-”
> “Don't worry about it. Misty is a great mare. She will be able to talk some sense into that little filly.”
“I hope so.”
>SpitFire shakes her head.
>“Well I know so.”
>You look down at SpitFire and smile.
“You're right SpitFire. I have nothing to worry about.”
>You hang around with the others for a couple hours.
“Well it's getting late guys. I should head home, and check on Misty.”
>Soarin lets out a loud groan.
>“You are so wiped bro!”
“Haha, fuck you Soarin. Anyways see you guys later.”
>The p0nies wave goodbye to you.

>>2551571
>Dat shipping
I WILL FUCKING RIP AMD TEAR, AND RIP AND TEAR SOME MORE,UNTIL YOU ARE NOUGHT BUT BITS OF RANDOM FLESH SOOOOORK!

>>2553960
>Oh fuck.
>"Uh...anyone want to play fetch?" you say against your better judgment.
>The dogs remain stone faced. God that was a stupid thing to say.
>Rainbow jumps ahead of you. "Alright you three, just back off!" she shouts down the hall.
>The smallest dog points his hand at the two of you. "See? Told you there were voices!"
>"What you think we should do?" the big one asks as he picks up his mace.
>Why the fuck were these dogs dressed for war?
>Oh well, didn't matter.
>You reach your hand into your pockets. You had a collection of spell crystals stashed away in the event you had to make a quick getaway.
>No need for a repeat of the manticore.
>The lead dog stroked the underside of his chin. "We not need this right now." he said to himself. "Why you in our caverns pony and ape?"
>Your eye drifts to the node sitting in the ditch next to you. "We came for these crystals, we'll leave once we get them."
>The dog folds his arms. "Should just kill you..." he mutters to himself. The dogs flanking him grab their weapons.
>Ohshit. You grab a handful of crystals and get ready to throw them.
>The dog waves his hand at the two of you. "Don't want to explain how you slipped past. Take your stupid rocks and go. Better not be here when we get back." he says as he turns around.
>The two dogs flare their nostrils at you as they leave. "Stupid ape not even here for gems..." echoes from the tunnel as they leave.

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>>2553997
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LaM9YRUsDXs

>"Good morning mother, how did you sleep?"


>I am perfect, I am pure
>I am the absolution,
>I am the ultimate
>I am the only
>I am the one to bring this land to peace
>I am the one to protect this world
>I am perfect, I am pure
>I am eternal
>I am, alone

1/8

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>>2554028
Okay that's my update. I will post more later tonight. I hope someone out there is enjoying this.

>>2554045
>You and Rainbow noped the fuck out of that cave faster than either of you could blink.
>The massive geode you were carrying didn't weigh you down in the slightest as you jogged through the wasteland and into the forest.
>Safely outside of Dog territory, you and Rainbow take a breather.
>"Why *huff* the hell *huff* were those dogs *huff* geared up like that?" you gasp out.
>"I don't know, Anon." Rainbow says, leaning on a tree. "But I hope your rock was worth it."
>It was. This geode could be the answer to your need for a higher conversion rating.
>You and Rainbow rest for a bit before you jump back on the path towards Ponyville, the geode sitting in your arms.
>Rainbow has gone back to her old habit of wrapping her hooves around you and letting you lead the way. "Hey." you say to break the silence.
>Rainbow rests her head on your shoulder. "Thanks. For coming along today. It's nice to know that I can count on more the just Mous to tag along for a dangerous job."
>Rainbow grins. "I'd be a bad special somep0ny if I let you go off and get killed in a cave somewhere." she says as she kisses your cheek.
>"Special somep0ny..." you repeat to yourself. "That still sounds weird to me."
>Rainbow laughs. "You're so weird, Anon."
>"Tch. You like it." you retort.
>Rainbow laughs again. "Yeah...yeah, I do."

>>2554070
Pastebin updated.
http://pastebin.com/u/Mandroid
Thoughts? Put 'em here.

Got one more shenanigans post tomorrow before the plot stuff happens.

What's the deal with the dogs? What's Anon's real name? Am I seriously almost at 50 goddamn chapters? Stay tuned.

>>2554047

>Twilight awoke in her bed, a cold sweat covering her
>She felt as though she may vomit, not from nausea, but this eerie feeling that enveloped her
>It was that dream again, of him
>In the beginning, before he turned, she felt close to him, almost, compassionate
>But he did not know emotion, such things belittled him
>He was unfeeling
>Incapable of knowing the nature of the spirit
>And she had suffered from this fact
>It would not be a stretch to say she cared for him, more than any other p0ny would
>But it didn't matter, he was nuetral, in all aspects
>His body, his mind, his soul
>He did not share these emotional connections as Twilight felt
"It doesn't matter Twilight, he betrayed you. He betrayed everyone."
>As she shifted from her bed, getting up, staring at her quarters
>A simple bed, a single bookshelf, packed tight with tomes of various sizes and colours
>Most damaged beyond repair, knowledge, lost
>The room smelled of basalt and mildew, the walls dry and cracked
>A small latern hung from a peg in the ceiling
>Twilight cast a small ball of light that floated up into the enclosing of the lantern, bathing the room in a dim light
>There was a rather large desk, patially cracked and broken
>A few books laid stacked messily next to several standing viles and flasks, one underneath a crudely made titration rigment
>A Yellow brown liquid dripped from a filtered plunker into a particular flask that contained a slated blue amorphis liquid
>Twilight picked up celestia's horn from her bedside and walked it over to the desk
"I'm sorry princess, but I must do what is needed."

2/8

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>>2554020

>The town feels sad and you feel the same
>http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=F3DZeizHQ5I (Play this till I say stop, have fun)
>You go around seeing some humans looking down
>Seems your dad was well known around town
>News that you were his son had traveled
>Humans would give you their condolences
>You thank them and tried to give a reassuring smile
>Some residents of the town that had seen you as a monster now show pity
>They have a heart and give it to the estranged
>Sadly your human and pony dads' hearts no longer function
>You arrive at Twilight's house to find Spike outside in his suit
>Spike: "I'm sorry that your dad died Anon. He was a pretty cool guy"
"Yeah, he was a great dad"
>Spike: "He would give me treats whenever I saw him in the market. Actually he would give any kid treats if he had any"
>You remember how your dad would give you treats when you were a colt
>One summer he gave so many you actually gained a lot of weight
>You chuckle a little at that memory
2/x

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>>2553954
> Pegasus that can walk on clouds
> heavy

>>2554135
>Using her magic, twilight twisted the cock, stopping the drip, and took the blue liquid from it's resting place
>She carried them to the other side of the room, to a small stand that held a plated burner
>Settling the flask on the burner, she opened one of the drawers revealing a multited of different leaves, barks, seeds, flits, and wood shavings
>She levitated three long thick leaves into the air, wrapping them tightly around the horn, then fitting some yellow flits into the end, before closing off the leaves
>A thin purple string appeared around the leaves, wrapping the opposite direction of the leaves, then doubling back and tying ends
>She then emersed the wrapped horn in the blue substance, bubbles slowly escaping as the horn sank
>She stared at the flask, her eyes beginning to water, before turning away

2.5/8
cause subject field too long for one post. I used decimals with fractions, come at me

>>2554062
I am, so dont worry

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>>2554157
"Is Twilight ready?"
>Spike: "She's almost done. She helped me get ready. Sorry"
"It's fine, there's still time"
>You see the door opening to reveal Twilight in a black dress
>Twilight: "Okay, well let's go"
>You go along beside Twilight and Spike
>The day gets a little cloudy going with the mood
>You follow them to the town's cemetery
>A deep heavy sigh leaves your mouth
>You were late
>Time gone and wasted by
>You can blame Fluttershy but you had plenty of time before
>You should have visited
>Not even a damn letter...
>Twilight sits down in the second row and gestures you to sit next to your human mother
>Your mother looks at you with eyes red and full of tears
Mom: "Anon...*sniff* you look cute in your little suit"
>Your face flushes but you figure its best to not mention much about your dad
"Thanks uh Rarity made it for me"
3/x

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>>2553954
>You wake up to the sound of screaming.
>The yellow one is back.
>No animals this time, no "stories."
>Just her. Easy meat.
>You roar, and her screaming rises in intensity as she backs away.
>She tries to catch you with her eyes as she retreats, but you're wise to that trick.
>You can smell her fear. Thick and acidic, hanging in the air like a spice for the meal to come.
>You lash out at her, and-
>Something breaks your hand.
>You don't see it, not at first.
>The bones in your hand just shatter, a blur passing over them, accompanied by hissing.
>You roar in surprise and shock, withdrawing your hand as your eyes dart around to follow the blur.
>Your eyes settle on a tiny white pony, with purple and pink hair. She's dirty, covered in mud and leaves, with dark smears on her snout. Smears of...
>You sniff. Now THAT was unexpected.
>She opens her mouth, probably to hiss again, and Fluttershy speaks up.
>"S...Sweetie Belle?"
>The tiny pony flinches, and you act.
>One heavy leap sends you past the tiny pony, and you land with a thump onto the packed earth, right in front of the yellow one.
>She screams, opening her wings and trying to jump away.
>She's not fast enough.
>You reach out and grip the feathered appendage.
>Then you rend it, tearing out feathers and muscle and skin in one swipe of your claw.
>The yellow one looses a scream that pierces the night sky with its intensity.
>A voice answers it.
>"FLUTTERSHY!?"
>Ah. The white one. With her precious Metal. You turn and bound away.
>The tiny white pony lets you go. She's staring at the yellow one's wing.
>At the blood that leaks from it.