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03/09/10(Tue)21:23 No.404598Oh,
so you did delete it. I replied to the review guy and then the thread
404ed. Reposting...
>>404381 Hey,
Second Sunset writer here. Thanks a lot for your email, it's both the
most encouraging and useful feedback I've got so far. Hope you don't
mind that I reply publicly, I like anon to call me out when I get things
wrong.
You're right about it being deliberately vague. Darte is a
cipher because it really is basically a descriptive piece, and to
develop his character would (like speaking in more detail about the
valley, or the government, or the war) be to pin myself to details that I
was honestly too lazy to actually come up with. Basically, I see
that the piece stands best on its own best without any extra detail or
character development, which sort of distract from the story itself
(whatever the hell I meant that to be). But if it were part of something
bigger, it would need better developed detail everywhere and some
sympathy hooks for the reader.
But yeah, as a stand alone piece
the Darte character is essentially unnecessary; I just didn't want it to
be emotionless description, you know? Second Sunset is almost entirely
backstory without any action. My next piece is almost entirely action
without any backstory. One day I might be able to write both at once. Also,
your email address is obviously a Dover Beach reference, but is it also
a Mortal Engines reference? If so, I need to buy you a drink sometime.
>>404475 Cheers Lind, his email came in
a minute before yours, but it's always nice to get one from you :3 You
had a chance to look through "Alecto" yet? (Fuck it needs a better
title.) |