OK here it is, my poem:---9/11:WHOOOOOOOSHBZZKZKKRKRZKRKZKR...AHHH RAAAAH...WHOOOOOOOOOSHBZKRRRKZKRKRK...AGHLLL NRRAHGL...BRK BRK BRK BRK---true post-modern /lit/, wow that is amazing.
"AGHLLL NRRAHGL"I wonder if the author intended this as a death gurgle.
>>2861018lol authorial intent is dead there is nothing beyond THE TEXT pleeb
Here's a poem called "The German Guns":Boom, Boom, Boom, Boom,Boom, Boom, Boom,Boom, Boom, Boom, Boom,Boom, Boom, Boom.
>>2861025awesome, I particularly like the enjambment, really puts me right there on the battlefield
>>2861016Started with a bang, but then the poem just fell apart.
I wrote one about 9/11 too.It's a haiku (japanese poem).Ahem ... here it goes: Get over it already, Americlaps.It wasn't even that big a deal.I'm serious guys. Really now.
>>2861025Is it weird that I actually like it?
>>2861025Love the choice in the number of words each line has. The use of repetition gives a striking effect, amplifying the meanings, as well as coalescing in a greater whole. Emanating from the juxtaposition is the rather quaint impression of a statement. I can hear the guns firing.
>>2861041BUT IT WAS THE FIRST ATTACK ON AMERICAN SOIL! ABLOOBLOOBLOO
>>2861047By someone other than yourself, you mean.
>>2861047Pearl Harbor dead rolling in their watery coffins. War of 1812 Zombies growling angrily.oh and all the assembled Ameri-dead from around the world getting ghostly angst up "What our deaths don't count cause we didn't drop with native soil under us?"
Face it, cancer, poverty, aids, diabetes, Fucking Tuberculosis, America don't care if you die, they care if you die suddenly in a dramatic way.
>>2861066Apparently. I'm just saying what they propagated at the time.
>>2861072My favorite is when they go to war and then act all huffy and mad when people die, like it's some huge surprise and nobody was expecting it.
70 people shot at once in the same place, Tragedy, 90 people shot in different places all over the country, boring.
>>2861047>>2861089I'm pretty sure the claim was first terrorist attack on US soil, but don't let me interrupt your glorious bashing.>>2861072>>2861119That's society for you. People will always be naturally inclined to focus on the things that easily stand out....>>2861039You are an awesome person.
>>2861170>I'm pretty sure the claim was first terrorist attack on US soil,Whatever. It's still a stupid statement.
