the top looks like its KS
what the hell are the other two?

>>7434212

KS, Shoujo Dandelion and Chill Out Babe, It's... actually I can't even remember the rest of the title, but they're all shit.

/jp/ has nothing to do with any of them other than their creators coming for here attention whoring and advertising.

>>7434212
I don't know, but that picture doesn't have The Fucking Question, a VN that obviously transcends the limits of most writers, something that we shall not see equal this generation.

>>7434216
It's "It just ain't your story" or something like that.

>>7434224
That feel when i downloaded it last week and still haven't read it

>>7434223

>>People discuss them occasionally and I don't like them, so they must be the creators samefagging and attention-whoring!

Why u mad bro?

>>7434230

>>7434238
Keep your sages to yourself.
counter-sage

>>7434238

>>buttfrustrated
>>respond with shitty generic /jp/ meme

It's okay, bro. I'm sure if you really tried you could write something worth discussing. Really!

>>7434252
>>7434246
No really just leave.
It's obvious that you are not from here

>>7434246
>counter-sage

Get the fuck out, summerfaggot.

>>7434255
I'm not that fag, but since when did /jp/ turn into some secret elitist club?

KS IS weaboo shit, but that's why /jp/ secretly likes it a bit. Dandy Girl was okay, mainly because it's based off a short story (Lion's romance does suck). The last one is an abomination, and I don't even want to comment.

At the very least, the first two aren't COMPLETE disappointments. But I'm with you on the third.

>>7434265
/jp/ has always had a no retards allowed policy.

It's broken into little pieces every day, but it's there.

I liked Dandy Girl. It was pretty nice.

>>7434238

I chuckled. Well played.

I'm okay with Dandy Shoujo, just because of Julie though.

>Saying anything is wrong with Dandelion as a VN
>Based almost word for word on a famous sci-fi romance story

Stay blind OP.

Most VNs are made with a huge amount of time and effort. I'd be willing to bet the translation work alone for the majority of VNs you've read (in English) rivals the time spent on these releases. That said, at least /jp/ is trying their best!
I should never have left you guys ;_;

>>7434292

Wait, I thought /jp/ hated Dandy Shoujo?

Hey OP, why don't you make a VN so that we can shit all over it without having played it or ever even considered giving it a fair review?

You know what's funny? The guys who did the first and third VNs in the list are generic attention-whores who spam their shit on /jp/ on a regular basis, whereas the guy who wrote the middle one doesn't even browse /jp/ anymore to hear you guys call him a fag.

OP, you are a fool. I won't even say why.

Unless you ask. Then I'll explain, after I wake up.

I enjoy Lion's writing, Dandy was cool. And that noir-ish thing he's working on now looks promising.

Can't we attempt writing a VN? It'll probably go to shit, but it might be worth a try...

>>7434461
Are you new?

>>7434466
Did you really have to ask that question?

>>7434461
You mean like the last five times?

>>7434466
Not extremely. It's just that I can't shake off the fact that /jp/'s got a lot of potential.

>>7434480
What ends up being the problem each time, anyway? Is there one in particular?

>>7434472
Did you?

I'm working on one you might like, /jp/.
A psychological thriller, I do need time to learn more python, though.

>>7434205
I think I'm gonna do a facepalm... (slams face into palm tree trunk)

While what you said about KS is true being a pretentious weeaboo generic shit with no depth... it was so bad that the devs needed to advertise and spam their game here on 4chan so people won't forget it... I don't agree with the other two.

Dandy Girl has a story... you just had to read it in a different mindset to truly appreciate it.

Same with the last one... the truly horrifying scenes are really meant to be that... again, it depends on your point of view... but it's generally a good read... though it requires a bit of understanding and knowledge on some of the subjects presented in that VN.

Of course... to each and everyone on his own... but please remember this...

The creators intent really doesn't matter... what really matters is how the audience will view it...

That is all...

>>7434624
>Same with the last one... the truly horrifying scenes are really meant to be that... again, it depends on your point of view... but it's generally a good read... though it requires a bit of understanding and knowledge on some of the subjects presented in that VN.
Oh and when I said "truly horrifying"... that is... in my point of view...

>>7434624
>I think I'm gonna do a facepalm... (slams face into palm tree trunk)
You're adorable, Mugen.

www.abs-cbnnews.com/business/09/22/10/smuggled-onions-china-seized
www.abs-cbnnews.com/business/01/06/11/onion-smuggling-raps-filed-doj
www.customs.gov.ph/newsView.php?id=28

Please, ignore the poster known as "mugenjohncel".
He is barely a minor smuggler and black market profiteer who labours under the delusion that he is a great tycoon.
His business is sneaking $4000000 of vegetables past customs, deny responsibility and frame colleagues.
Truly, he is a laughable figure.
The state of his country is worrisome.
I would not desire him as a comrade, nor as my friend on the internet.

>>7434637

I already report all his posts unconditionally.

>mugenjohncel !!lsNOT2DQXWT

>>7434637
B . . But I thought mugen was just a friendly old man from jaypee who drew pretty pictures . . Why would you do this uncle moogie?

>>7434485
Interest dies off after a week or two once most of the ideas have been thought up. No one wants to do any of the actual work, and artists (especially decent ones) are hard to come by.

>>7434651
Oh that... while it's true that several 20FT container of onions are illegally smuggled and funneled through my (now defunct) Brokerage... it's actually one of my associates who is doing all that... he's in jail now but of course I also landed in hot-water for that (since I own the company) but after a few weeks of following the paper and money trail and several documents uncovered + shipping manifestos... I was cleared... nevertheless I was stripped of my license to operate for more than a month... more than enough to wreck the whole company (I mean, if I can't operate... how am I supposed to pay for my employees) which forced me to close it and instead concentrate on my other businesses...

Why would you waste your time reading garbage like KS in the first place? It's all written by hack writers.

Go watch The Sopranos or The Wire or one of the other hundreds of TV shows that has actual writers writing it. Or a manga that's not shit. Or a fucking book. 99% of VNs are shit, and the good ones aren't translated and not worth learning Japanese for. Why waste your time on an inferior medium?

>>7434681
Well... you could say some people are after the CG's... I mean, I've heard rumors that some people increased their masturbation rate after viewing CG's and other graphics that has me UNCLE MUGEN in it...

>>7434668
That's unfortunate.

>>7434702
Filtered and reported.

You advertise a fucking shitload, but you... well, you're an all right guy, mugen.

God damn, I had to get that off my chest.

>>7434702
mugen-san ......you're so good to me.... and i'll be so good to you

when you bought that Pepsi, and bag of Fritos......... i secretly gave you an employee discount

you didn't know cause I punched in the key code when I saw you walk in

i timed it right

it takes you 24 seconds to walk to the back and get a pepsi bottle, and chips

luckily no one else was in the store

you always grab the right-most bottle. I kissed that one when i stocked it earlier.

oh mugen-san

you said "keep the receipt". and I will. I really will.

Mugen have you even done any entertaining OC lately, I havn't been around and was just curious?

all 'visual novels' (read: caption image slide shows) are shit regardless of language

you want a real story, go read a real book

fuck, turn to the classics if you have to

>>7434727
i wish do this do uncle mugen but i live in canada.

>>7434752
He was working on a few requests, but lately he is really busy,

>>7434752
He just did Madotsuki menstruating yesterday. I'd call that entertaining.

Perhaps /jp/ should make a 100% tsundere VN. You start off as a Japanese guy who moves to Seattle, and eventually you encounter more and more hipster girls. The hipsters range from slightly annoying to full on trust fund bitch.

>>7434637
schizophrenia
you don't see THAT disorder on /jp/ every day

All 3 focus too much on the romance aspect, that's why. A good VN needs something more.

>>7434835

Agreed, although at least Lion was modest enough to say he sucks at romance. The others are trying way too hard to not sound like shit.

>>7434835
Are you saying Matches & Matrimony wasn't good?

There is Shock Cocoon which is in development. They stopped updating their website since getting a new artist though. Someone (one of the team members) posted this clip last night asking for help changing the theme in renpy.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nnHb6-gyyPA

Most of these fail because their founders try to collaborate and form teams before having made a decent sketch. Unless the team already has experience with development, successful projects always start as one-man tests (see Linux, Touhou, and hundreds of others).

I liked Dandy Girl (it's "shoujo" now?). : ( Is anyone else going to read Lion's remake, or are we going to sage the Dandy threads and troll like every other EVNo?

>>7436240
Holy fuck they better remove that bitch voice saying Studio Nihi.

>>7437952
After getting like 50 better recordings of people saying "Studio Nihi", yeah.

Get out KS devs

>>7434246

Dandy did have connections to /jp/ even though it wasn't really done here at all.

KS has its roots to pre-split /a/, but that as well have had some minor connections to /jp/, but with the old staff gone and with the project having been revamped numerous times already, that connection have been sort of severed, gone, and trampled upon other than viral marketing and spam.

The last one though? It wasn't mentioned until it was done and later posted all over the place. It is no different than most of all other Renpy things, other than this one being done.