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02/25/11(Fri)02:08 No.902364>>902034
Mind you, when i say you have to do something, I really mean if I were you. :)
1)
Remove the dark line, instead, shade it. Too heavy of lines can totally
throw off a pic, in the real one, she looks feminine, in yours, her arm
looks kind of muscular.
2) I'd just make this darker, collar bone is a feminine aspect that should be taken full advantage of
3) I dunno why these lines are there
4) Her boobs don't stick out far enough for this. get rid of the line, instead add a heavy shade.
5) Add that line, very feminine line.
6) Get rid of that line, add shade instead
7) yours bulges out, and the stomach shading makes her look chubby
8)
This line goes up too far, notice on the real picture, it stops, then
shading starts, but curves upwards, very sexy feature, you should
definitely add that.
Also, boobs you made larger, so that might
be why that boob line is there, idk, if you're drawing this knowing that
girl will see it, you probably shouldnt make her titties larger, if
it's just a random pic though, i agree with your choice of a slight
breast enlargement. Also, you made the nipples too small.
Nice though |
