help yourself

;(

How about you help by sucking my dick

>>511436
May I?

> insert critique here

goddamnit /ic/ what's wrong with this pic?

>>511454
What's wrong is you not sucking my dick

why do i even post here

It's like trying to crit the style of ed edd and eddy. its just too stylized to make any kind of solid critique. All I can saw is the glow effects look really shitty (glow is caused by contrast, not color choice. try desaturating your pic and you'll see what I mean), not to mention the lines on the swirls are very jerky, and in the overall piece, you need to have more line width variation.

learn to lightsource/planes of the face. all you did was shade a kinda egg shaped sphere with a bump for a nose and two pits for eyes, not taking into account the other natural contours of the face.

>>511468
>It's like trying to crit the style of ed edd and eddy. its just too stylized to make any kind of solid critique.

You're retarded.

OP, you do not have a foundation of artistic ability. Learn from life for a few years and try again.

>>511481
ROFL

>>511499

Uh...?

Do you have a problem with telling people to learn how to draw? If so, perhaps a critique board is not for you.

>>511499
Guy is right. The best thing to do is to study from life and learn the essentials before applying it to style.

бля , что за херня , убери лучше к чертям этот оранжевый фон ._.

The problem with many starting artists, that while it is fine to pursue a certain style of drawing, anime, cartoony, whatever, it should not be viewed as a shortcut through the fundamentals. To study the fundamentals is not a call to realism, it is to augment your understanding of art. To give you a solid foundation upon which you can build upon and, instead of a style like anime, to be the foundation of your craft. Art is an imitation of life. Anatomy, perspective, composition, values, color, all things that if an artist has a thorough understanding of, can only serve to help the artist to gain a "gradual and fundamental improvement of all of one's work." so they can successfully transcribe their work into reality.

so
I got rid of those shitty lights and redlined it myself to see if I could learn something.
Sorry for the extremely stylized skull
I see now that the calves where too short, arms too long and hands was way to big.
Also the head was kinda eggshaped with no jaw at all.
The colouring was shit and also lineweight.
I would like some help with that right foot and also the back which I have green lined.

>>511504
No hes laughing because you gave him no helpful critiques other than "Draw from life and apply them" which is true, but not helpful. Op wants to know how he can improve this drawing, and you didn't do that, nor do you ever do that.

Op the redline here >>511711 pretty much sums up everything I was going to say. The long arms, jaw line, hands are off, small head (remember you need a brain), and perspective on the foot are the things that stand out the most on it. I also want to add that your hair is very flat and needs more volume. This should be easier to do once you fix the head. Change the background color. It clashes with him and the orange vapor stuff; and speaking of those, try and make them symmetrical, that will help some.

All in all op, they're right. Study realism and proportions along side your cartooning.

bump

>>511781
ok so
I remade most of the pic also his face but I need some help with the right foot, I just can't get it right hnghgn
Also the hair wat is going on there
I will colour this tomorrow

It's unfinished, but.. any critique?

>>512059
It seems as though you don't have the hair coming out from the top of his head but from the side. This makes it look like a wig. I actually think it would look better if you just made him bald.

finish it! :o