your lines are really.. hairy? it's best to only use one stroke per line

Arm on right, the elbow should be farther back. Remember the length from the top of the arm to elbow is just a TINY bit smaller then the length of elbow to wrist.
Bring the head down, to give her less of the giraffe effect with the neck.

>>463383
HOW THE FUCK DID THE EYES GET IN FRONT OF THE GLASSES?

>>463388
!!!!

>>463383

Thicker outside and thinner inside, experiment on what you like best, how much thickness outside is to much or to little and how much inside is to thick or thin.

Especially in comparision.

>>463412
kill yourself.

cool