1.) Stop drawing anime
2.) Kill yourself
3.) ???
4.) Who cares, we don't have to deal with you anymore, you fucking faggot.

>>458520

aww, thank you.

Why would you ask for crit on a finished piece? it makes things so much harder to fix.

Nice balloon tits, they don't look real (or even fake). They just look inflated. You have no light source that I can tell, the light is just coming from EVERYWHERE. Nice job copping out on the eyes. Next time actually practice drawing them instead of closing them or covering them up with an eye patch.

Speaking of that eye patch, how is its strap running UNDER her(?) horn? That's physically impossible.

Also, I know you animu artists just love adding random doodads to your characters, but what's the fucking point of all this shit? Scissors? A bell? I bet that one character isn't even missing an eye.

Fuck, this picture makes me angrier and angrier the more i look at it

>not used to draw female characters
>anime

is that sum gaiashitz?

>>458536
made me lol for some reasons

>>458536
I lold too.

Although he does have a point about the strap horn thing.

The wing should be fixed, looks too wavy, (the light pink areas look like they are the support for the wing, it should be rigid.) or just get rid of it. /shrug

The line art could use some work, looks a bit wobbly and half assed.

Also agreed that the light / shadows just seem to be there, Won't scuff too much, I use to do the same thing. But try and work on that next time.

>this thread

Do the boobs look more natural like this?
I demand some tips, anons.

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>>459000
BREASTS DO NOT ATTACH TO THE COLLARBONE

GET AWAY FROM THE BUTT FROM THE FRONT

>>459000
No
let me try and redline

Right is me trying to fix it while sort of sticking to the look
seriously though, the upper half of her torso is way too short and the tits look baggy

if this is what you're aiming for then its fine just as long as u realize only little girls will like it just keep practicing

specific crits will be useless since its obvious you're aiming for this style and not accidentally fucked up a realistic drawing
i will however join the other anons in saying that its shit and if you decide to learn to draw realistically at some point (and from there develop whatever style you want) you need to scrap most of what you know and start over preferably begin with anatomy studies

that being said "realism" is not better and you don't -need- to study fucking anything since its not your profession just draw what you enjoy even if its some boring anime cliches

>not used to draw

>>459005

thanks, trying to fix it.

>>459000

Cameltoe? lol?

ever seen a naked woman?

>>459757

I'm a woman.