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01/26/12(Thu)00:16 No.1109823 File1327554964.png-(292 KB, 1057x1224, ssswf.png)
>>1109738 first
off, those heart buttons are very wrong and i think you know it. you
cant get lazy with the details /especially/ in anime. second, the left
elbow needs more shape to it in my opinion. her upper arm should be
slimmer at that point, even if she is chubby. Her shoulder should be
higher and connect more fluidly with her neckline, and her right hand
seems wrong, though it's hard to put my finger on why (no pun intended).
it might be worth a second look. her belt also seems like it goes up to
high on the right side, even with the tilt of the hips, which isn't
much. and on a personal note, i don't like the eyes. not because they're
anime,, but because they lack charm. the lower lid line seems far too
low and the lashes seem half-assed. nice tits though. i assume you
realize shirts don't work that way though, right? |