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01/25/12(Wed)00:41 No.1109158>>1109155
I like your art style a lot. You're channeling mid 80's manga/anime,
without feeling rehashed. I also enjoy that the body designs are
horrific, but it's noticeable at first, the art style being airy and
cheery as it is. This is probably pretentious to say but it's subtle.
Line quality is good, too.
That said, it seems the woman in the
top left had a large portion of the back of her skull carved out. I
suppose, if her hair was completely flat against her head in the back,
it'd be okay, but the rest of the hairstyle doesn't seem to compliment
that. Her face seems really thin in the frontal view, but after looking
at it, it's just the effect her hair has on the shape of it. Still, the
first impressions on the woman's head make her seem really
disproportionate compared to the young man on her right. |