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!USIWdhRmqk 12/31/11(Sat)19:57 No.1092817>>1092795
Wel,l
the most noticeable issue is that her hands are too small, I've made
this mistake too, remember; If they were to stretch out their fingers
their hand should be as big as their face. Also, I can't tell what she's
supposed to be holing in the left hand, and the right arm is too close
to the center, making her shoulder pose look rather uncomfortable.
Speaking of which, you forgot to draw a shoulder, ya goof.
Her
torsoe communicates that she's standing at an angle, while her legs are
lined up as if she were facing us head on. Move the left leg further
back by moving it up a bit and makin' it smaller, hell her calves are
too long, anyways.
Also...wind? Is there wind in this picture?
Because the bottom of her jackets moving one direction, while her hair's
moving the other, unless this is one of those "anime trenchcoats that
defy gravity" scenarios?
Lastly, I get that putting yourself out
there can be a bit intimidating, especially on an imageboard with a
track record like this ones, but come on, sack up. What, are we gonna
punch you through your computer or something? It's just text on a
screen, son. It might sting a little but you aren't going to grow as an
artist unless you can take criticism, and it's your job to seperate
constructive criticism from petty insults. |
