typo in the thesis. not reading further.

>>15623788
Too long; read anyway. Why did you do this?

>>15623859
I didn't. A student in the writing class I T.A. did.

Horrible essays

>>15623888
Just curious, what grade is the class in?

I used to shit out better essays in elementary school for a pack of cigarettes.

>>15623888
D-
Insufficient research. Uses opinion instead of fact. Terrible spelling and grammar. Used "u" instead of "you".

>>15623788
What grade?
Is English the student's native language?
Does the teacher/school test for plagiarism? I ask because parts of this read like a bad encyclopedia entry.

>>15623939
It's a university course.

>>15624017
I weep for the childen/future children of these individuals.

>>15624017
University? Not even junior college or something?

>>15624017
Man, that's sad.

>>15624017

...seriously?

Jesus Christ.

>>15624017
Sorry, I don't believe you.

>>15624007
Sorry that constitutes an F in my book, sure they went through the motions of putting all of these words down but that doesn't mean it deserves anything better than an F. 25 points on the 100 point scale, for the effort of actually typing it all out.

I remember this thread. Also,

>What makes the American versions different from there Japanese counter parts what makes the Japanese versions different from American versions last but not least how are the same.

>>15624149
In the school I went to (we used E instead of F on the grading scale), you only got an E if you didn't even attempt the assignment, or if it was obviously plagiarised. Making the small effort to attempt the assaignment, no matter how shitty it was, earned a D.

Chris-chan is a better writer than both of these people. Wow.

>>15624210
>What makes the American versions different from there Japanese counter parts what makes the Japanese versions different from American versions last but not least how are the same.

My guess is that this was poor word-count fluffing. Although the whole paper is a trainwreck.

This is supposed to be an essay?
Where the fuck is the title? What the fuck are you writing about?
Why have you reached a conclusion before you've even started writing?
This doesn't even warrant a grade.

which one of you failfags did this??? come on 4chan you confess right now!

>>15624281

In the original thread we realized that it was actually a Frankenstein of several sentences. It's probably meant to be

>What makes the American versions different from there Japanese counter-parts? What makes the Japanese versions different from American versions? Last, but not least, how are they the same?

Which is not a thesis clearly. No points for Gryffindor.

>>15624231
...but an F is anything less than 60%.
This is not 60% of all requirements fulfilled.
This is not 60% of anything.
This is 30% at best. An F on a grading scale is a gift at this point, preventing observers from being able to tell exactly how hard the student has failed.

>>15624425
Australian school, bro.

>>15624449
>terrible, super-low, essentially nothing requirements that any retard can pass
>not an American school
o_O