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(ID: Uuxc8TVu) 03/27/12(Tue)10:48:23 No.389424694>>389423596 sorry,
doesn't really help, it's a writing problem. even if you assume that
they micromanaged everything to give katniss the perfect story (which i
don't think you can, and although a couple problems can be attributed to
the directors, not all of them), then you can take them out of the
equation and put in god.
if you wrote a story where god had
completely random things happen to the character and then completely
random things got them out of it... like, say, a character was being
chased by a killer, fell on the ground, the killer got on top of her,
she stretched out her hand, and there was a gun... not the one the
killer had that was knocked over in the struggle, because that would be
fair, but a gun that some unrelated mugger had dropped weeks ago, and
she uses the gun to shoot the guy and get away. and you do that over and
over and over again... chances are you're writing a shitty story. it
doesn't matter if you assume god deliberately put the random things
there to test/reaffirm their faith, it's still not a good story (you can
sometimes get away with that kind of story, but you have to be a really
good writer). |