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    25 KB /cgl/ Island Postaway !bDXDtwmbHg 08/02/11(Tue)23:03 No.4800666  
    Chapter 1: Arrival

    The ocean. A body of water so vast, that it hides many secrets. The world has come to know many of her majestic wonders but has never tamed them, nor found all of them for that matter. Her great mysteries only grow day by day, and this is no exception.

    Slowly coming to, everything was blurry. Coughing up a mixture of salt and sea water, gasping for air. Blue awoke to find himself soaking wet, abandoned on an unknown shore. "Ugh... my head...." Holding his head in his hand, Blue tried to gain his footing and stood up. "W-where... Where am I?"

    In every direction there was only sand, surf, rocks, and the foreboding forest that stood before him. No signs of a boat crashed upon land. No crash site of a plane that had lost control or met an unfortunate fate. It would seem that he was alone. But things are always more than they seem.

    Looking around, slowly becoming hysterical, blue called out to anyone in hopes of finding a comrade. "Hello?? Is anyone here??... ANYBODY?!"
    >> Postaway !bDXDtwmbHg 08/02/11(Tue)23:04 No.4800674
    "Don't shout so loud! My head's still spinning from whatever the fuck got me here." Blue spun around quickly to find Todd standing behind him. Walking out from trees, rubbing his temples in agony, the brash tripfag staggered over to Blue. "Where the fuck are we?" "I'm not sure." Blue replied. Still turning to and fro, looking around in hopes of finding some semblance of anything to explain this tragedy. "This is... This is insane! How in God's name did we end up on this island!?" Todd looked nearby for something to stand on and gain a higher view point. Climbing up a nearby rock embedded in the sands, he took a quick look around to see what he could find. Blue called up to him. "Do you see anything?" Sweeping the beach with his eyes, Todd sighed and shook his head. "I got nothing dude. There's not a damn thin- Wait. I think I see someone else!" Todd began waving his arms high in the air, shouting out to the faraway castaway. "OY!! OVER HERE! HEY!!!" The unknown figure stood up from the tide and turned to face the two tripfags. It was Matt.
    >> Postaway !bDXDtwmbHg 08/02/11(Tue)23:05 No.4800685
    Matt ran over to the large rock to meet up with Todd and Blue. Blue ran to Matt and grabbed him by the shoulders, unleashing a barrage of questions. "Matt are you alone? How'd you get here? Is anyone else with you? What's going on!?" Matt brushed off the boy's hands and patted him on the shoulder in hopes of calming him down. And also to lean on him in order to catch his breath. "Take it easy, bud. I have NO IDEA how I got here, but good news is I'm not alone, and yeah there are others with me, around the shore. I went swimming in hopes of finding something in the water but I got nothing." Todd hopped off the rock and walked up to the two. "Who else is with you?" Matt stood up after regaining his composure, coughing a bit and clearing his throat. "So far, Don Kanonji, Piplup, Tenleid, God, Maguma, and Smoker. We built a small setup, just something temporary for now till we all kind of come down from, ya know, being stranded." Blue's eyes widened with a bit of hope. If more people were on this 'deserted' Island that he knew, maybe there were more people, maybe hope of getting back home. But for now it was time to head over with the others and stay together.Matt led Todd and Blue to the so called camp. There were logs set up around a pile of rocks with a fire going in the middle, Maguma was using his shirt to make smoke signals with Smoker while the others sat around, trying to dry off and stay calm. Tenleid looked up to see Matt accompanied by the other two tripfriends. "Hey! Matt found other people!"
    >> Postaway !bDXDtwmbHg 08/02/11(Tue)23:06 No.4800687
    Everyone turned to welcome back Matt. Piplup chimed in, "That brings us up to 9 people here, and who knows who else." Don, overlooking the ocean, sighed softly. "Yeah that's nice, and where does that get us now, huh?" In every way not a single land mass could be seen. No nearby landmasses, no ships, no continents. "We're practically fucked out here man!" Smoker was also a part of the rainy day parade, not adding to the easing of the scenario. "I'm still not sure why we're still making smoke signals, there ain't a fucking thing in the sky." "It doesn't matter," exclaimed Maguma. "If we do something it's better than nothing. I'm sure someone will see it if they fly by."

    Matt took a seat on the log next to Maguma and Smoker, wringing out some of the water in his shirt. "For now, sit down and take a load off. We'll see if we can catch some fish or something later, build some shelter, have dinner, and figure out this whole mess later. We got no clue where we are, how we got here, and when we're leaving, so none of us are in a hurry." Matt was right. Whatever it was that brought them here, had definitely inconvenienced them to the point of no return. They were alone. For now...
    >> Anonymous 08/02/11(Tue)23:06 No.4800690
    This is the part of the thread where I post to add that this thread is fucking dumb.
    >> Masao !AXKingCkkQ 08/02/11(Tue)23:09 No.4800711
    Holy lack of editing, Batman!
    >> ai-honey !eEQ3LJoZmM 08/02/11(Tue)23:12 No.4800734
    This is woman island and you're focusing on the men?

    Okay.
    >> ♠Todd♣ !V//////Mxg 08/02/11(Tue)23:13 No.4800743
    >>4800674
    >"OY!! OVER HERE! HEY!!!"

    Why would I say "oy"...
    >> Postaway !bDXDtwmbHg 08/02/11(Tue)23:13 No.4800746
    >>4800734
    This is barely the start and you're already assuming what it's all about?

    Sure

    >>4800711
    Just cranked it out for shits and giggles.
    >> Anonymous 08/02/11(Tue)23:13 No.4800749
    Awful writing aside, it could at least have been a Choose Your Own Adventure shitpost
    >> piplup !Ebgln4OHzA 08/02/11(Tue)23:14 No.4800756
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    the fuck is this
    >> Katsumiyo !bSYx8p6gbU 08/02/11(Tue)23:15 No.4800761
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    It's Shark Week. Let's do this shit.
    >> ai-honey !eEQ3LJoZmM 08/02/11(Tue)23:16 No.4800763
    >>4800746
    Er no. I simply said your focus on the men is amusing as /cgl is mostly mental women. And raptors, apparently.

    Also stab yourself in the face for using the term 'tripfriends' please.
    >> ♠Todd♣ !V//////Mxg 08/02/11(Tue)23:16 No.4800765
    >>4800746
    BTW, what does piplup look like?
    >> Postaway !bDXDtwmbHg 08/02/11(Tue)23:17 No.4800769
    >>4800763
    Your post seemed sarcastic.

    Also deal with it?
    >> BLUE !./././VTrk 08/02/11(Tue)23:18 No.4800780
    >>4800685
    >Matt brushed off the boy's hands and patted him on the shoulder
    >also to lean on him

    matt what the fuck are you doing man
    >> Maguma !ftEuMagUmA 08/02/11(Tue)23:20 No.4800800
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    >>4800780
    Catching his breath apparently?

    This. This is interesting.
    >> BLUE !./././VTrk 08/02/11(Tue)23:22 No.4800814
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    >>4800800
    So long as that's all he's doing
    >> smoker !VUmDTeLJOM 08/02/11(Tue)23:23 No.4800822
    My name is in this thread 4 times and I haven't even posted. I feel fucking 12, and what the is this.
    >> ai-honey !eEQ3LJoZmM 08/02/11(Tue)23:25 No.4800833
    >>4800769
    Someone seems mad, maybe you should channel that into checking your punctuation.
    >> Postaway !bDXDtwmbHg 08/02/11(Tue)23:26 No.4800840
    >>4800833
    When I actually spend time to write properly I will.
    >> Matt !o504RVa/WI 08/02/11(Tue)23:27 No.4800849
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    Aww yeeeaaahhhhh
    >> Don Kanonji !qQ0Wv/4eCY 08/02/11(Tue)23:27 No.4800851
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    >>4800687
    >being pessimistic
    I don't like this....

    >>4800734
    I have a vagina.
    And I'm pretty sure Piplup is a girl, too.
    >> Masao !AXKingCkkQ 08/02/11(Tue)23:28 No.4800856
    >>4800749
    >>4800763
    Word. I think I'll make a Choose Your Own Adventure one later tonight.
    >> ♠Todd♣ !V//////Mxg 08/02/11(Tue)23:28 No.4800861
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    >>4800840
    I hope you turn this into a story like Battle Royale. Or like Suicide Island, which was way too fucking creepy. I had to stop reading it.
    >> ai-honey !eEQ3LJoZmM 08/02/11(Tue)23:30 No.4800868
    >>4800840
    Oh Jim, put down the keyboard. The internet does not need more bad fanfiction.

    >>4800851
    I think you missed the word 'focusing'.
    >> tenleid !R6n4uEROGE 08/02/11(Tue)23:30 No.4800870
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    but why does this even exist
    >> BLUE !./././VTrk 08/02/11(Tue)23:30 No.4800871
    >>4800861
    >battle royale
    oh fuck
    make this happen somebody
    Knowing my luck I'll be the dude with the goddamn fork.
    >> Matt !o504RVa/WI 08/02/11(Tue)23:31 No.4800878
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    >>4800870
    I wouldn't question it.


    It's hilarious.
    >> Postaway !bDXDtwmbHg 08/02/11(Tue)23:31 No.4800880
    >>4800861
    We'll see. Personally I just wanted to just shit something out in homage to /cgl/ academy and con of the dead since this whole /cgl/ island nonsense sprouted up.

    Again, I did this for the shits and giggles. How the rest will turn out? We'll see. I was thinking of just making it horror survival.

    >>4800868
    Doesn't stop the internet from producing them regardless, heh.
    >> smoker !VUmDTeLJOM 08/02/11(Tue)23:31 No.4800881
    >>4800871
    But everyone likes you. You have plot armor. Me? I'll get the flame thrower and someone will shoot the tank within the first 5 minutes.
    >> Anonymous 08/02/11(Tue)23:31 No.4800885
    >>4800840
    >When I actually spend time to write properly

    Don't use this as a excuse for when people critique your poorly written shit
    >> ♠Todd♣ !V//////Mxg 08/02/11(Tue)23:32 No.4800892
    >>4800881
    >>4800871
    Wow, I haven't actually seen Battle Royale. No spoilers, please.
    >> sage Anonymous 08/02/11(Tue)23:32 No.4800896
    This is where all the newfag trips post and pretend to be important.
    >> smoker !VUmDTeLJOM 08/02/11(Tue)23:33 No.4800900
    >>4800892
    Me neither, but I know the premise.
    >>4800896
    I'm not new or important.
    >> Postaway !bDXDtwmbHg 08/02/11(Tue)23:33 No.4800905
    >>4800885
    Meh, using Firefox as my source of spell check, that's what I got. Didn't re-read or go over any of it.

    Of course it's poorly written.
    >> BLUE !./././VTrk 08/02/11(Tue)23:34 No.4800911
    >>4800881
    You'll be, like, the Red Shirts from Star Trek.
    It's okay dude, I'll help you with my fork.

    >>4800892
    It's pretty good, you should check it out.
    Messes with your head though.
    >> ♠Todd♣ !V//////Mxg 08/02/11(Tue)23:34 No.4800918
    >>4800880
    Come on... make it a creepy story where we murder each other. No rape please, I hate rape.
    >> smoker !VUmDTeLJOM 08/02/11(Tue)23:40 No.4800945
    >>4800918
    No rape? Damn, I had a song for Don planned and everything.

    I THINK WERE ALONE NOW . . .
    THERE DOESNT SEEM TO BE ANYONE AROUND . . .
    >> Don Kanonji !qQ0Wv/4eCY 08/02/11(Tue)23:42 No.4800954
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    >>4800868
    >story has just started
    >a handfull of characters are introduced
    >some of them female
    >story has not progressed any further
    >accused of ~focusing~ on males

    ...I think you're confused.

    >>4800900
    >>4800896
    Ditto.
    >> Don Kanonji !qQ0Wv/4eCY 08/02/11(Tue)23:44 No.4800966
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    >>4800945
    AHAH! BUT THAT'S WHERE YOU FORGET ABOUT MY TRUSTY SIDEKI-- PARTNER IN BATTLE, MATT.
    We watch each other's backs. Believe it. Or we will, when this all... goes down. Yeah.
    >> B-O-Y !lXtoUMADsc 08/02/11(Tue)23:46 No.4800979
    >>4800734
    the women of cgl are the fat scary things that come out at night and the trips have to defend against
    also
    the raptors ride on them and wield spears
    >> Matt !o504RVa/WI 08/02/11(Tue)23:51 No.4801010
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    >>4800966
    Yes!

    >>4800979
    YES!
    >> ai-honey !eEQ3LJoZmM 08/02/11(Tue)23:53 No.4801019
    >>4800954
    One day people will understand my sense of humour.

    One day.

    Honestly there's several reasons to make fun of it in such a manner, the obvious ones pointed out already.

    I liked the original thread as it involved the board, including anons, rather than just providing wank for tripfags to bask in. Bad wank at that.
    >> smoker !VUmDTeLJOM 08/02/11(Tue)23:53 No.4801025
    >>4801019
    Wheres all the rum gone?
    >> B-O-Y !lXtoUMADsc 08/02/11(Tue)23:55 No.4801039
    >>4801019
    but this can become a survival/horror story
    where the board decides which trip gets killed off in the night next



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