Looked like Squall and Quistis in the thumbnail.

The art looks good but it just doesn't fit a visual novel

It looks like it came from a Shoujo manga, to be honest,

>>24792974
This.

Too much emphasis on details, If you are using this style for a VN of this size, it needs to be toned down or else it's going be a bitch to draw everything

FAGS

So...I haven't been following these threads, but I guess i'll pop in to ask what this is.

Male character looks emo, Jeffrey. Female needs to be more loli-like.

>>24793020
>>24792974
I have to agree, you seem to be making it too serious. Have the art more 'moe' for want of a better term, because that pic looks nothing like Pokemon art style.

sage in all fields
have some cp while you're at it

Some male uniforms. Don't hesitate to tell us which you like. As our audience, your opinion is valued highly.

I'm here to help. just feeling a bit sick today.

Why not ask /fa/ about the uniform?
I'm dead serious.
Because I sure don't have any fashion sense at all.

Are the uniforms what they wear out on any field trip? Because if they are they should be of a more practical design.

I like the uniforms, but the guy's design doesn't seem to suit the setting.

>>24792974
That's because they're concept sketch, sweety.

>>24792836
A bit dark for pkmn, no? I like how the pokeball has been incorporated into the design though.

Considering these kids are learning to be trainers you should have some thing for battled, either a belt or sash or some such to hold pokeballs or even a special uniform not unlike gym uniforms (you could replace gym with pokemon battles even with the fields having special props and thus shed for protagocist and misty to get stuck in.)

Also; what, no hats?

>>24793020
Indeed.

My idea is, the VN isn't meant to appeal only to the female fans but to the male fans as well, I'd rather choose a Pkmn VN that has similar art as Umineko or Higurashi than this one, the art may suck, but at least it seems to be right for the VN it's been used on.

Just like a portrait, the art must match the story like how a picture is to a frame, make the frame to grand, and the picture will be disregarded, while making the frame too poor in appearance makes the picture look like trash as well, they must synergize to achieve the perfect result.

I was honestly hoping more drawfags were going to contribute to be honest. I cant stop my shoujo from showing!

>>24793069
The characters are nobody in particular.

And an important note. This art is NOT representative of the final art style of the visual novel. I'm just asking your opinion on the designs themselves.

>>24793122
Ash has a hat, not everyone has a hat.

>>24793095
Either the first or the second one.
The green one is horrible and I don't know what I should think about the brown one.
The brown one would fit the principal well.

>>24793095
lol @ the brown one.
2nd for the left is best.

>>24793069
It's about the uniforms. They're using characters from the series.

The concepts are good but like everyone else has said, you need to simplify them unless you're willing to work that hard for everything. The art also would require the pokemons themselves to match the style. Are you guys willing to keep that up is the question.

>>24793088
>Credit cards accpeted: Vista

>>24793106
/fa/'s taste level is pretty low.
Asking TFS is lot better.
www.thefashionspot.com

>>24793095
Far left is best. Brown is horrible.

>>24793170
Hats are sometimes part of a school uniform. Seeing the male uniform has clear Jap influence there should be a hat.

>>24793202
perhaps a homage to the hat?

This has got to be a fucking joke. What the hell... are you 7 years old?

>>24793202
Something like this then?

>>24793230
Maybe. Ash can keep hit ORIGINAL hat, not that new whore of a hat, and everyone else and have something more low key.

>>24793162
Make this an example, Pkmn is meant to be light and happy

My advice is, just imagine you're drawing adolescent who has a mind of a 12-13 y/o person.

thinking of the personality while drawing may affect the appearance.

Some female uniforms.

>>24793253
This guy knows what I'm talking about.

Is this the final sketch design for the uniform? I thought it was preliminary. If this is final, this has to be redone.

>>24793268
this. sketches way too detailed and SRS

>>24793262
indeed this is what I was getting at

>>24793283
#4 design, warmer colour scheme.

>>24793283
Looks too out of place, mang.

>>24793283
None are great, but the first one is ok due to it's simplicity.

>>24793304
They're concepts. These are just to get and refine ideas before going through the stylisation process.

>>24793346
Yeah, 4 would be half decent with an improved colour scheme

>>24793283
The third one.

But seriously.
Did you play FF8 lately?
Those look like SEED-Uniforms.

>>24793233

>>24793283
Uniform numbers one and three are the better of the set.

>>24792836
Just gimme the fire starter and free pokeballs.

>>24793268
But the characters are older in this. And if this is Pokemon how we want it then a middle ground between the two would seem more pleasurable.

>>24793291
These are just some of the first ideas. It's good but we've made no choices yet.

I still think the school in F/SN has the best uniform.

>>24793390
They seem to be based from FF

dude looks like Squall in the thumbnail, just like what this dude said
>>24792949

>>24793390

Shit man, I don't even remember FF8.

>>24793268

I.. Don't know if I can make loli happy things. Someone replace me, I'm too lazy to make anything at the moment. I know there's people out there who can draw. Draw dammit!

OH JOY COPYRIGHT INFRINGEMENT OF A FUCKING SHITTY FRANCHISE! WHAT A BRILLIANT IDEA! CAPS LOCK!