>>18251135
10 years into the future, the story shifts focus to the protagonist, a young private eye who's ability to find evidence in an instant and ability to solve crime is unrivaled. It is reveal that he too has a "Tool", the ability to see 3 days into the past (later on he also gains the ability to rewind his environment [10 metre radius] back in time allowing him to see destroyed evidence as well as witness the murder itself if within 3 days). He gets a case where there are no evidence left behind a murder of man shot in the head. No bullet hole, casing, residue were left and no one heard anything. Using his abilities, the protagonist looks to the past, expecting evidence, only to see the murderer speaking to him, in monologue, taunting the detective and claiming what he is doing is Justice.
"By the way detective, time's ticking"
A bomb can be seen planted in the replay of 6 hours ago.
It is now 6 hours later.

The detective survives the blast and thus begins the cat and mouse hunt between a detective who can see into the past and a vigilante who could see into the future, as well as the mystery behind the girl with golden eyes and these so called "Tools".

sugoi monogatari aniki

>>18251137
>>18251135
it's going to have the same problem death note did.

>>18251234
which is?

>>18251135
>>18251137
0/10

>>18251135
>>18251137
fund this shit

>>18251254
Shonen Jump will force you to change the story to something shitty. Like it did with Death Note. And Bleach too.

>>18251283
what was Bleach's original story like?

>>18251254
justice pulls a just as planned, which get's just as planned into irrelevance by detective's plans. their abilities cancel each other out. this could actually have been avoided if light wasn't exactly as smart as L, and they had vastly different thinking patterns.

but basically, plothax becomes the only plot device

OP is a tool

>>18251135
-10/10

>>18251135
>>18251137
Shitty Death Note/Code Geass mix is shitty.

the whole idea of the eye is too code geass all the seeing eye/reversing time is too OTT, it needs to be more limited.

>ITT Manga Ideas
In b4 /v/'s "okay, no, wait" guy.

It's the end of a title match. Boxing.

The champion bumps into someone. Girlfriend of the guy? Steps on his foot?

Flashing entrance. To black, interspersed between scenes, for credits.

Either way, the offended bystander whacks the man square in the jaw, and he flies back several feet.

He does a single flip. Everyone's astonished as the man who attacked walks by the champion's second and his gym mates,
who are astonished. The second, in an irrational gesture, grabs his arm and asks him to join.

"No, that's not possible. I'll kill someone if I learn to use my fist better."

also, he's contradictory - he was told never to use his fist against people, but he suddenly felt the impulse to do so when he saw
the champion - is it something else driving him? is it destiny? or was it just an impulse? or even longing for a challenge?

Coach pursues him? Idk. Maybe he becomes world champion through holding back his fists - there's something
inhuman about his fist. Then, it turns out he's much, much stronger than he ever let on - in his last match before retiring,
he hits the opponent so hard he actually clears the ropes and flies into the audience. Completely impossible, right?

>>18251379
That's not what shonen jump think.
I doubt in meetings they tell to each others: hey guys, Ichigo should be less powerful. Give the word to Kubo.

>>18251383
>"okay, no, wait" guy.
I lol'd for some reason. I have his face on my mind.

jUNE !zzH5nB9KnA

Stop samefagging to bump your own thread.

How about this:

The protagonist is the typical wimpy male lead (but at least he has friends). He doesn't know well how to interact with girls so he somewhat avoids them. This got him wondering if he's going to have a girlfriend or wife when he gets old.

One time he visits the next town and comes across a creepy looking place. Out of curiosity he enters the place, only to be greeted by a creepy looking person in front of a crystal ball. Before our hero speaks, the person said, "I know what you're thinking. You will be pleased with what I have to tell you."

The boy is startled, and blankly takes a seat.

"Will I have a girlfriend?"

"Yes."

"You mean, I'm going to get married in the future?"

"Yes."

"As in I will have a wife?"

"Yes."

"Oh really. Have I already met this person?"

"Yes. You know him, actually."

He thought for a second, then said, "Really? I know her?"

"Yes, you know him."

>>18251319
True except in this case, he already saw the murder take place, but he can't catch him due to lack of evidence, there are no gunshots, nor casings, nothing except the detective's own abilities which he can not explain in court.

The only way to prevent further killings is to take Justice out himself using force, which is dangerous because Justice can see him coming within a 3 day time period. However, the protagonist can pickup any mistakes or information left behind by Justice with 3 days. Both of their abilities rely on their ability to see, so if they want to confront each other, they have to be very close.

Justice has the advantage of seeing ahead, but if somehow the protagonist realizes, he can change the future by straying away from what as seen by Justice.
The protagonist on the other can't see what Justice will do, but can pick up clues by looking into the past.

Another problem is that Justice will realize he can't not kill the protagonist with his Tool because it requires the protagonist to know what he is doing is immoral.

It's too simplistic. I know it's a shounen so it doesn't need to be overly complex, but your characters are far too shallow. A desire for justice is not a personality, and not getting that is the reason Shounen jump sucks so much. A character needs to have likes, dislikes, a certain level of changing opinion, and some kind of a goal even if it's just to buy a new video game. "I want justice" is the most terrible goal you could possibly think up. It's completely uncreative, and unrealistic. No one randomly decides to fight against injustice and save the world from some unrecognizably threat that may or may not exist. It also doesn't help the story, so don't give me any of that. A story where the main character's daiologue consists of "I need to do this", or "there needs to be justice", or "this is wrong" being the main focus will only deteriorate the reader's attention towards the work. I'm not one of those "anti-moralfag" people, but your characters lack dimension, and in this case it doesn't help anything.

>>18251452
hmm yeah

>>18251447
I'd watch it.

>>18251447
Now this really got him thinking, and asked to verify something.

"You mean her, right?"

"Him."

"What the hell, what do you mean him? You just said I'm going to get a wife, you mean I'm getting married to a guy?"

"Who said you're marrying a guy? Of course you will marry a girl."

"What? What is it exactly?"

"Are you an idiot? You will marry a woman. You already know him."

He was unable to speak back.

"It's simple. As of now, he is a man. By the time you get into a relationship with him, he's already a girl."

Damn this, he thought. He just left.

>>18251452
>I want justice" is the most terrible goal you could possibly think up
You lost me.

>>18251452
>I'm not one of those "anti-moralfag" people

But didn't you just explain pretty well what the anti-moralfaggotry is all about?

Don't give in to the moralfag trolls that would want everyone to believe disliking moralfaggotry equals only liking indiscriminate murders.

>>18251546
Shirou is one of the examples of a well fleshed out "justice" character. Rather than have him become just an "I want to be a Power Ranger" mentality, he actually wants to save everyone with complete disregard for his own life and health because he doesn't value it; almost as atonement for being the sole survivor of the last Grail War. Thus, he's acknowledged by the other characters as having a broken personality because of this.

>>18251544

I could read this... Drawn by Katsura or the Ichigo 100% author for best ecchi style.

>>18251319
>>18251234 guy here
ur idea had potential, i was just being honest about it's faults

>>18251447
>>18251544
And the they're not even the main characters (think Ga-Rei Zero ep 1). We still have to go to the juicy shonen parts yet.

The world was actually undergoing the forbidden era called Transvesia that repeats itself every couple of thousand years. This is the time when about a quarter of the world's population have their sex type changed (either by magic, science, or any other method). There are a very few people who are aware of this and they are called the Gayaslordes. In fact they are the driving force for the changes that happen.

Our real main hero is really furious because his beloved childhood friend-turned-sweetheart became a man more manly than him. As a descendant of the elite Chwaqua tribe of Gayaslordes, he was aware this is the work of the translords. He seeks then his revenge.

This will very exciting. It will be filled with lots of JUST AS PLANNED moments, including GARs (and reverse GARs) and power-ups (Testo Level 3!!! Oh looks he's burning red!!!). Also, lots of moralfaggotry.

>>18251135
sorry to sound newfagish but what the is origin of TC pic?

>>18251135

>>18251926
TC?

Boy wishes "There'd be justice"

and gains the ability to get raped in the ass by 3 gay cocks, talk about a home invasion

>>18251896
>moralfaggotry
>in a transvestite series

I wish someone could make this work

>>18251926
>S.Wilson
>newfagish
>TC
ur a faget.

sounds like code geass + death note.
I'm stating the obvious here, but I have to say it.
Try and come up with something creative.

What's the originality ratio on a reverse of the whole 'boy gets transported into mystical, magical realm with harem' concept? By which I mean 'dude from mystical realm with no magical powers (fighter) ends up in modern world and has to deal with it.'

>>18252163
And what? Shacks up with some dude and they go to school together? Oh! Oh! In the ending, he gets a basic 9 to 5 job, and becomes a salaryman.

>>18251135

> A boy's family was brutally murdered during a home invasion

Done to the death, but tolerable...

> being the last member of the family alive, he was beaten up and tortured by a sticking a cigarette in his left eye.

I'm getting tired.

> Just as he is about to be executed, he makes a wish, wishing that "There'd be Justice".

I stopped there.

>>18252163
>>18252211
Fuck I lol'd.

>>18252211
>>18252163
I'm ashamed to admit that I'd watch that.

You fucking weaboos writing your retarded cliche'd crap. I'm emberassed to say this, but the shit in shone jump sounds better.

>>18252211
Crashing study dramas! Teachers out to get him! Exam finals! The burning soul of a man's desire to achieve his goal... Salaryman Genkai! To be published later this year.

Ok, here's one.
The protagonist is FABULOUS young male and a skirtchaser. + he is a cannibal, but he only steals dead bodies.
THEN he gets involved into a real cannibal murder case.
A female pedophile detective finds out that he is a cannibal, both of them learn their dark secrets and they will start solving bizarre murder cases.

I'm Japanese.
I'm taking note of this thread and will use your ideas in my way to success. thanks.

>>18252492

>>18252507
That sound actually pretty good.

>>18252536
Also, would work great as a comedy.

>>18252507
Except that the topic was about a shonen story. Not seinen.

>>18252507
already been done lol

>>18252507
Sounds like a chapter of Franken Fran to me.

>>18252563

We'll make it SEINEN Jump

>>18252567
source or something?

how about a show about a guy thats new to a school in japan, he is american and there for unknown reasons, then every episode a different girl falls in love with him, and he gains special powers but only if he wears their soiled pantsu on his head, which then turns into a magical top hat of varying colors.....

thats the whole show

>>18252567

But can you show any EVIDENCE that will prove it?

>>18252620
I'm not sure, but I think that's actually been done.

A nun and a demon fight evil ancient powers and shit. lots of explosions and baww. It's cool because it's an unlikely pair.

Everyone knows a shonen manga about Anon would work out best.

Basically my idea is a spinoff off dragonball z. In it Tien has a time machine which transports him from alternative universe to alternative universe fighting injustice and trying to figure out a way to get home. During his journeys he awakens the secret power of his pysclops eye (ever since he was a kid he always wondered why he was considered special) and his eye always him to detect where injustice is happening. Also his eye allows him to see the path home, but it is a long and convoluted one.

>>18252664
Chrno Crusade.

>>18251283
>Shonen Jump will force you to change the story to something shitty. Like it did with Death Note.

They did?Explain please.

>>18252673
No one would watch a show about weeaboos getting into slapfights over their favorite shows.

>>18252742
What, you think Light's sudden drop in intelligence was supposed to happen?

>>18252752
Why not? We watch worse stuff than that already.

>>18252752
Silly, that has nothing to do with Anon as a persona.

>>18252823
Oh, so Shonen Jump was behind this.

>>18252890

Damn those moralfags in Jump...

>>18252752
I would watch it. If it was made by japs, it would be something like welcome to the nhk except with their silly AMERICA stereotypes.

How about this for a One-shot?....

A girl (not hot, rather plain and cute) starts her second year in high school and is nominated as class tutor.
She shits a mountain of bricks when she sees a tall 30-something old Anon (neck beard, droopy eyes, wearing sandals and smoking a cigarette) wearing a school uniform and sitting in the middle row.

The class tutor (let's call her "Rumi-Q") learns later that the Anon ("Bacarat")has flunked the second year about 14 times and has never been expelled by the teachers whatsoever (maybe they gave up already hope, I don't know)

We also learn that the Anon is actually staying on the school at purpose, since he "likes" school (meaning that he is leeching from it and only stays for the cafeteria food / comfty desks for a nap / jailbait?.....

make a show about a girl with a penis that fights hot anime demon babes along side her 8 year old psychic side kick, a little blonde boy that wears lipstick and has a habit of lifting up the protaganist skirt. Throw in another group of heroes, some of whom that have a crush on her but do/dont know her secret and viola, instant hit.....

oh, and her cock has a mind of its own, its the source of her demon fighting power and likes to rear its ugly head during combat....

someone name this instant classic!!!

>>18252939
Looks ok, but what is this about?

>>18252939
Needs a focus.

An Anon story would probably develop somehow like Chaos Head.

>>18252507

Fund it!

>>18252994
Except that Anon would have no special abilities, and instead end up kicking ass through.. err.. what's a redeeming quality for Anon again?

>>18253072
handsomeness

>>18253103
Hahahaha, oh wow...

Anon would probably have the internet as a 'powerup' and use 4chan as a medium, i.e. gather up all the misery, rage and hatred of other anons and crush the enemy with sheer hopelessness, destroying their minds

make story about some loser that has fetish for jacking off outside, but one day he jacks off in front of a power plants and it fly over the fence during meltdown of EPIC levels cause of a space meteror and turns his jizz into beautifal girls that have powers of sugar, spice, everything, NICE!!!

>>18253253
Fund it!

shonen jump needs to make a story about my dick and all the adventures gets into, the crazy tales it comes across, and the meaty action it buries itself into for the sake of all its screaming fans

>>18251135
Generic moeblob harem animu shitsux

>>18253752
Who wants to read a manga about you shoving your dick into a piece of steak?

The protagonist is a high school guy who has the power to alter reality. Meets a girl who he can't affect, and who notices any changes he makes. She wants to stop him, and ends up pissing him off; he could just kill her and alter reality so no one will ever find out, but he kinda likes her.

He uses his powers to try and woo her in fabulous fantastical ways. She tries to get him to just accept reality and stop changing it into his fantasies. Romantic comedy/drama

>>18253775
Why did I lol'd?

>>18253775


your right, this would be so much better if it was animated

wait no

ok

a boy

saving the world fighting against the evil with his own unique super power

>>18253775
meat curtains?

>>18251135
ITT underage fags with no influence on sj at all

I have an idea, how about a show about this kid with a giant magical meat grinder, who has to stop all the filthy queers in this world from turning his favorite power rangers show into a show about interior decoration, not just that show, but ALL shows, and he has to fight his way thru track lighting and empty tubes of anal lube to grind with the main bad guy himself, the evil Dick Summons!!!!

>shonen jump sucks and /a/ sure knows it.
I_only_read_mature_manga_for_someone_as_mature_as_myself.jpg
I wouldn't have cared that you said if your story wasn't so cliché and boring, and LOLGRIMDARK

Wait no

ok

4 teenagers aged 13-18 go on a quest to save the world. Involves:

Main male lead: guy with hueg sword

Female lead: Childhood friend. Probably priestess class.

Secondary male: Good friend of male lead

Secondary female: Probably some mysterious person

First chapter will be named "This story is in no way ripping off the tales series". Series will have plenty of fanservice including a hot spring scene.

And this series shall have a bigger fanbase than all the Big 3 combined. The only thing different here is probably the main leads have names so weird, Japan couldn't think of them.

>>18254127
by huge sword you mean big fat cock?

if thats the case then i think i will pass

FAGGOT!!!!

speaking of manga ideas, has a golfing shonen been made yet?

A boy lives in a normal and quiet town with his friends and family.
A giant monster attacks
An awesome guy with powers comes to save the day before the monster destroys the town
The boy meets the awesome guy who is a member of a secret organization
The awesome guy dies, but he gives his power to the boy
The boy joins the organization
He learns to control his power and fight giant mecha monsters while trying to mantain his normal life in his town
He becomes awesome and GAR
A lot of plot twist during the story

>>18254402
The organization are the real bad guys?

WHAT A TWIST!

Teenage anime Heroes sin city mashup.

anime about girl detective hot on trail of serial killer rapist, SURPISE ITS HER DAD, awww I ruined it :(

anime about boy who finds angel girl hurt and takes her home and nurse/fucks her back to full health and she makes him her trainer to fight the other angels that rebel in heaven, they all are naked lolis with swords and wings and the only thing that covers up their naughty bits are clouds but the reader can just pretend its puffy semen

>>18252939
Sorry for the delay, here is the rest of the plot:

....After a lot of misunderstandings where Rumi-Q has to take responsibility for Bacarat''s shit (for example, a scam where he trains the kindergartners to work for him when they graduate) , she doesn't stand it anymore and goes to the principal's office and asks for Bacarat's expulsion. inb4 drama and shitty flashback:

....In reality, Bacarat is the result of an affair between the principal (that started as a teacher and got promoted) and a ex-schoolgirl (just like Bacarat, droopy eyes, quirky looks) a long time ago. This misterious girl prefered to keep their relation as a secret (so that Croupier doesn't get busted) and move out with her parents from town without leaving any trace....

10 years later, an odd-looking kid comes into school. He is living currently with some far relatives. Whenthe principal talks with them, we learn that the kid's mother died giving birth. In some letters found in her closet, her relatives knew her biggest wish: She wished that her future son visited and graduated in her hometown school.

if i see the word organization one more time...

Organization.

>>18254890
...Back to the present. Croupier explains Rumi-Q why can't he force Bacarat to leave the school, since it must be done at free will to respect her mother's wish (Obviously, Bacarat doesn''t know shit about this, he is just having a good time)

"A little filler, a beach/ Onsen chapter and a final showdown where Bacarat saves the day and proves that he isn't a total useless later".....

Rumi-Q is a grown woman, she goes to school to pick her little daughter from first grade. A statue of Croupier stands in the middle of the park, and Bacarat is an old geezer that works as the school janitor and takes care of Rumi-Q's daughter.
Bacarat winks Rumiko and she smiles. END.

>>18255079
what are you babbling about you stupid little monkey

>>18254402
ROW ROW SEEMS FAMILIAR

If Bakuman has taught me anything.

It's that Shonen can give 10 craps about your story. But if kids like it, you're doing it right.

>>18251135
excuse me wtf r u doin?

That's like YYH meets Code Geass meets Dare Devil meets something vaugly familiar I can't remember.

The singularity is coming. follow a person through his journey as he experiences it. basically, animate Accelerando.
FUCK YEAH FUND IT

>he was beaten up and tortured by a sticking a cigarette in his left eye.
Someone played World at War recently.

>>18251135

lol shitty mirai nikki + bleach mix

A boy comes into possession of an ancient crystal--one of the four that created all life--and now it--and by extension, him--must be protected by a VERY reluctant succubus.

>>18256239
>>18256239
>>18256239

Stealing idea to make a book. Thank you.

>>18256255

You son of a bitch, that's mine!

I demand 60% of all profits!

a manga set in a typical jap high school, but the characters are obsessed with pulling practical jokes and pranks on each other for various reasons.

think death note but no one dies.

>>18256367
Fapnote.

>>18256367
>>18256389

>>18256389
>>18256439
well, I wasn't thinking of people jizzing into other's gym bags, more like setting up water buckets on doors or spiking the punch.

Okay, there's a clan of ninjas and a clan of pirates that have been at war for years. But then, zombie robots attack and they have to put aside their differences to defeat them. WITH GUITARS.

Lots of girls and one guy raping them all.

This could work.

>>18256389
FUND IT!!!